Reviews For Becoming A Family
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Reviewer: mad dog Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 9: My Foolish Brother

I hated the son I thought he was hateful, spoiled brate I  add least want to care about the character but I couldn't 



Author's Response: The point is not too LoL his character is spoiled purposefully to make the situations he go through not considered irrational or that it happens to him for no particular reason. His attitude and view on life puts him haphazardly into ill situations.

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 14 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9: My Foolish Brother

the story is hard to make much sence expect  he was a spoiled  brate' I did'nt like the character at all or the plot,it wasn't very good.



Author's Response: Thanks! I will put up another story up for you later tomorrow, hopefully it will be interesting for you. Also, the story Becoming A Family probably will not get nitty gritty until the next three chapters. Again, thanks for the review!

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