Date: June 04 2022 1:26 PM Title: Alyssa's Discovery
Loved the toilet bowl chapter! Made me wet as hell!
Date: May 19 2017 4:04 PM Title: Alyssa's Discovery
Incredible :) Can't wait for more. The way you wrote this, the desperation of the tiny person. The ass part was such a tease :p I hope there's more of that to come. I understand if it isn't your thing but I'd love it if you were to write a big fart into one of your chapters too! :p
Date: May 19 2017 6:11 AM Title: Alyssa's Discovery
I really liked the detailed discription of her - so easy to picture her - switching perspectives and detailing the event from different angles, I was hoping that there was more shrinkees trapped in there and she would discover several of her friends to rescue, while at the same time, getting the revenge that she so badly wanted.
Yeah, continue this, or start another one. Nice work!
Date: May 19 2017 12:59 AM Title: Alyssa's Discovery
Interesting start. Will there be more?