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Reviewer: El Rodrigo Diaz De Vivar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 3:41 AM Title: Chapter One: Getting to know the crew (Prologue)

Woops deleted a review accidentally here :D Sorry officerkc! Just wanted to correct my response

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2017 10:27 AM Title: Chapter Nine: A Desperate Mission

I just finished reading these first nine chapters in one setting. Pretty good! Can't wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response:

Glad you like it so far! I hope the  story's development can live up to your expectations :)

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter Nine: A Desperate Mission

Kudos for staying consistent. That's great! What an adventure. Haha can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you'll like the direction in which the story advances.

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2017 9:52 AM Title: Chapter Seven: Survival Of The Fittest

Oh damn we have a casualty! Will be interesting to see what happens when the girls actually realize the shruken people. 



Author's Response:

Vince didn't see that coming... And regarding the latter... Well we'll find out eventually!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter Six: Catching Up With Reality

I'm not the biggest unaware fan, but this really is a fun story. I think you've really made these characters come alive. Love how frequently this is updated too. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Yeah as I'm a good deal further on the writing already I'm able to release them on daily basis. I'll try to keep it like that!

Reviewer: Oblivious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2017 11:26 AM Title: Chapter Six: Catching Up With Reality

I'm enjoying this story so far, and I like how you're handling the scale of everything. I hope this remains to be an unaware story, because I've seen a lot of stories I've enjoyed falter because it switched mid-way through. I look forward to reading more, so I hope you keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Glad you like so far, but I'm sad to disappoint you. As I've pointed out in the summary there will be a change of course pretty much exactly mid-way through :D Sorry for that in advance. I really enjoy writing unaware stories as well but at a certain point I have the feeling that (in my cases, I know there are different approaches) it begins preventing the story from further progress. I hope you keep enjoying the story and thank you for your review.

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2017 12:53 AM Title: Chapter One: Getting to know the crew (Prologue)

I love this story so far. I can't wait for Steven to experience time under Valery's feet. Hopefully it isn't even close to what he expected, the smell is probably ten-fold stronger (and definitely not of cherry blossom) up close. I'm looking forward to some detailed sensory overload in this unaware story. Love your writing,and godspeed.



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that and I can already promise that in the course of the story, what you're looking forward to, will definitely play a role.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter Five: the Princess and the Bug

Squish.

Author's Response:

Poor Steven...

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter One: Getting to know the crew (Prologue)

Nice setup and start.

Author's Response:

Thanks I hope I was able to keep it up with the upcoming chapters :)

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2017 8:29 AM Title: Chapter One: Getting to know the crew (Prologue)

This is a really good story so far!! I'm ready for LOTS of giantess booty!!! 😍🍑.

Author's Response:

Hey there Peter :) Glad you like it and let's see if the story can live up to that ;)

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