Date: September 25 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 13: Fracture
Love the new clothes store. Will Mrs. Nelson put izzy back together. Will she babysit her?
Author's Response:
Probably not friend. Keep reading thought. Mrs. Nelson's pretty important to the overall story by this point.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2017 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 13: Fracture
Nice to see it took a possibly serious injury to break through to Sab, great chapter and looking forward to how it ends up.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your supportive comments. I hope you enjoy how this all turns out.
Date: September 21 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 13: Fracture
Ouch, hope Izzy's alright good thing her mother's a doctor otherwise she'd be kind of screwed well she still may be considering her mother's buzzed and all that.
Anyway, great chapter I like the idea of sleepover so Izzy can get to know all of Sabrina's friends. Who knows it might also change Izzy's mind on running away in the end. Actually, now that, I think can she really run away with being chipped and her location is known at all times?
Author's Response:
The sleepover is something that will happen eventually. There is a plan for Izzy where being chipped comes into play and a long term solution to that issue. Don't worry things will work out.