Date: July 24 2017 11:13 PM Title: deleted
I remember when you sent me the scenes with Marissa, it was always hard to read because of the degree of cruelty of the scenes. Great job on your first story in over a year.
Date: July 24 2017 4:15 PM Title: deleted
Really good start to your story. I like it a lot. The premise is really cool, very reminiscent of a show that only aired one season on NBC back in 2013 called Do No Harm. I love that there's this one innocent personality completely devastated by what her alter-ego is doing. And now that she has Jeremy, I wonder what she will do. Will she try to nurse him back to health? Will she try to get him to understand her predicament? I'm eager to find out. Keep it up!
Date: July 24 2017 4:15 PM Title: deleted
I loved this story!! I'm so hoping the next chapter isn't really the last chapter. This is one of the best reads I've read on this website and such an interesting concept. Can't wait to read the next chapter on Wednesday and hoping to see some more F/f action