Date: August 03 2017 7:18 PM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
I'm more of a soft vore fan so I thought the final part was a little brutal for my taste and I would love to have seen a little more from Faye's perspective thoughts while all this is happening but the writing and storytelling was great definitely made the list of authors keep an eye on
Date: August 02 2017 5:54 AM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
Have to admit I read the first chapter when you first posted it and kind of skimmed it a read something else, now going back and actually reading it I'm low wow that was a mistake this is amazing writing and a great story overall can't wait to see how it turns out
Date: August 02 2017 3:04 AM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
I'm just not feeling this story. it reminds of another one I read once with a guy that started treating his shrunken wife as a plaything over the course of the story and, despite being a fetish story, he was just such an unlikable wanker it drew you out of it all.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2017 6:32 AM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
I have to say this is one of my favourite stories posted here in a long time.
What you did with your characters is simply amazing. Each one seems to have such a strong impact in their own way making this story move past simple smut.
I love the clever way you have focused more on Erin and Gwen minimizing the original main character Faye. Her role now becoming more of device to move the others relationship forward in the story which to me is rather sexy as it dehumanizes her to even the readers. The tiny isnt the focus only the "real" people Gwen and Erin matter.
Overall fantastic work! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
I think you are going to love the last chapter, after you're done just reading it and you start to think about it more properly. It's the longest chapter, and yet the entire thing is devoid of one simple thing. I think you'll enjoy it if not love it like I mentioned originally.
Thanks! I will do my best to keep it up!
Date: July 31 2017 1:00 AM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
great stuff. hoping for cv but great work either way keep it up
Author's Response:
Forgive either my ignorance, or my exhaustion for not recognizing what it means, but what do you mean by CV?
Date: July 30 2017 8:30 PM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
Love the story. However, as a transgender person, i ahve to say the whole genetic defect, 0.00001% of the population thing isn't really necessary. Trans people exist, that's easy a lot easier to convey.
Author's Response:
Fair, fair! I suppose that when I'm writing futa characters (although I don't refer to Gwen as a futa character in the story) that I kind of seperate that fetish of mine out from writing transgendered characters.
Futanari are a fetish of mine that I add into stories, and come up with 17 different justifications for them (i.e. a chick with a dick, to be crude) existing for any given character. Since I don't like feeling as though I'm making a fetish out of transpeople, I don't often go with that explination for why said character exists. And I didn't go with it here for that exact reason.
Date: July 30 2017 3:22 PM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
The whole dick thing isn't really for me but as far as story goes, gosh I hope that vindictive bitch cops the shrinking thing as well and gets what she deserves.
Author's Response:
I totally understand! Luckily, I have the intention at the moment (once I've finished editing, uploading, and all the hoopla surrounding Cheater, Cheater?) of going back and basically writing the story with one small change.
Erin shrinks instead of Faye.
I'm sick to death, tbh, of writing the names Erin, Faye, and Gwen, so all of the characters will have different names, but the basic premise will be fairly similar; Only Faye's character isn't one to willing let someone weild a dick on her, so... The next version(?) of this will not have a futa character.
As far as Gwen getting nailed by the shrinking thing, well... Spoilers!
[Report This]Date: July 30 2017 12:58 PM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
Really enjoying this thusfar, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Luckily for you, I'll be able to keep the chapter upload here at a steady rate because I've already written the whole story (minus the epilogue)!
I just need to edit the last five chapters...
I kind of hate editing with all of my soul.
But, they'll all be up soon(ish)!
[Report This]Date: July 29 2017 8:39 AM Title: Of Harmony and Hangovers
Hey Edai, no desire to change the story here. I will say that so far I'm loving everything about this. Will Faye's plan work like she hopes or will it backfire spectacularly? I'm along for the ride either way. Great work all around.
Author's Response:
Well, now, that would be spoilers~