Date: December 11 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
This story is so awesome! I especially love how you include the Dad— it really makes it seem real and humiliating for the narrator! The chapter called “Parental Terror” is my favorite. Will you ever add to this story, or write more like this chapter?
Date: April 26 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
will you ever come back to this and make more chapters? please!!!! its so good and would be great with more family interaction and maybe additional family members
Date: October 02 2020 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Ok so I gotta ask, will Adam ever catch a break? Don't get me wrong! I understand what comes into this story. But in the family's case, do they actually love Adam? Will they eventually forgive him for his faults and even help him appreciate them more or will he just be a pest permanently to them.
Date: January 08 2019 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
please sir, will you continue?
Date: May 19 2018 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
I’m hope your going to continue this story soon!
Date: November 26 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
I ove this so much. Maybe there could be more getting tied up, or some jar stuff??? please less mens feet lol but its your story. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'll keep that in mind going forward and thanks for reading!
Date: November 12 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
oh i thought you stopped writing.please more of mom's feet!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and the review! Definitely will be more of that!
Date: November 12 2017 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
I'm surprised at how much I'm enjoying this. I would love to have a bit more action involving him being held rather than just feet tho. Also how about his mam and dad use him while they're having sex?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm really glad you like it!
There's not going to be any sexual stuff in this story like that. I'll work in more stuff than just feet too.
Thanks for the review!
Date: November 05 2017 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Please add more. I can't wait any longer lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
I'll try my best lol.
Date: October 23 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
This is one of my favorite stories. I love the name Alyssa too and I love how mean she is. Would it be possible if there can be some sock parts?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like Alyssa. I was aiming for the bratty, mean older sister character so I'm glad to hear you like how mean she is. I have a chapter coming up in few chapters that is going to be with Alyssa and socks so it's coming, just give me a little time. Probably will be a few other chapters involving socks as well.
Thanks again for reading and I'm glad you like it!
Date: October 08 2017 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
More more more! Please add more soon! lol it's magnificent! Also I hope there is some giantess booty soon. 🙌🏻🍑🙌🏻
Author's Response:
Thank you and I'm doing the best to add as quickly as I can. Thanks for reading!
Date: October 02 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Really love this sotry so I have a question... Could we maybe see the dad sit down on son unaware while not having any pants or underware on?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it and sorry, but that will not be happening in this story. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 29 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
YESS!!! More more more! Please make more. If you could add some giantess butt crush that would be AWESOME. I luv this story! I can not wait for more. 🔥😍
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm really glad you like it. We'll see.
Date: September 12 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
I feel like being sick, so while it's taboo, I'd love for the sister to tape him to the bottom of one of her feet and give her other brother a nice, slow footjob.
Author's Response:
Not gonna happen. I'm not doing any incest stuff in this story. I'll keep the idea in mind if I ever write a story with a couple and a tiny that are not related in any way, shape, or form.
Date: September 11 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
What do your think about the idea that the family abuse adam sexually with their feet? I don't know if your want incest in this story but i think it Will be a nice bonus
Author's Response:
Will the family abuse Adam with their feet? Yes. Will they sexually abuse him in anyway, using their feet or otherwise? No.
Date: September 11 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Yessss!!! Keep this going just how you're doing it!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! How you do the FM/m is perfection! It's a masterpiece. The only this that would make this above perfect is if the mother or sister would use their 🔥🍑🔥 giantess butt to punish him. I can NOT WAIT to read more! Your score can only go to 10... but if I could I'd give it a 20. The only thing I want is for it not to end hahaha 😅
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it.
Date: September 10 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Why do you write the brother as if he is another sister? You may benefit from making it just a F/m story which will also boost your audience.
Otherwise your writing is good and interesting
Author's Response:
???
Not really sure what you mean by that...
I know FM/m and FM/f stories aren't the most popular and that I am limiting my audience and who this appeals to but I wanted to write something different. If you want to read a F/m story (not tring to sound like a d**k here), this isn't the story for you. I'm sorry about that. It will focus mostly on F/m but there still will be some FM/m going forward.
Thank you though for the compliments!
Date: September 09 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
i cant wait to see where thise goes and how many family memebers get involed! love the feet parts and being stuffed in shoes! keep it going
Author's Response:
It's going to center around feet so plenty more experiences with feet and being stuffed into shoes are coming up.
Date: September 09 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
Awesome story
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 09 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray
I personally would love it if you shrank Eric down as well and let the mother have on and the sister the other. That would be an enjoyable way to keep everyone involved!
Author's Response:
I'm not sure about that happening in this story but I'll keep it in mind and who knows what might happen. The story will most likely focus mostly on the mom and sister going forward.