[Report This]Date: December 26 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
It’s a good story but the size fluctuations don’t seem to have any relevance to anything... maybe have him start to stabilize at a good size for her to start having some fun. Also you made it seem like she knew more than she was letting on earlier in the story... maybe clear that up a little (even if it’s in a way to let the audience know without informing him.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm getting around to the big reveal on that front, and I have decided to keep him a steady size for the time being.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
It’s a good story but the size fluctuations don’t seem to have any relevance to anything... maybe have him start to stabilize at a good size for her to start having some fun. Also you made it seem like she knew more than she was letting on earlier in the story... maybe clear that up a little (even if it’s in a way to let the audience know without informing him.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
It’s a good story but the size fluctuations don’t seem to have any relevance to anything... maybe have him start to stabilize at a good size for her to start having some fun. Also you made it seem like she knew more than she was letting on earlier in the story... maybe clear that up a little (even if it’s in a way to let the audience know without informing him.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
It’s a good story but the size fluctuations don’t seem to have any relevance to anything... maybe have him start to stabilize at a good size for her to start having some fun. Also you made it seem like she knew more than she was letting on earlier in the story... maybe clear that up a little (even if it’s in a way to let the audience know without informing him.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, can't wait for this to be continued. Cliffhanger driving me mad!
Date: October 14 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
great work so far! i hope you keep up the unaware giantess stuff even though emilia is trying to be careful!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, there's still going to be some unaware material, even though Emilia knows about Kaleb.
Date: October 14 2017 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I just wanted to say that I like where this is going and that I am looking forward to seeing how you continue the now "aware" interactions!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouragement!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2017 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry for the late review, read this at 4 am last night and was out of energy. Thanks for uploading two chapters at once, it seems far too often the best stories on this site get abandoned after the first upload. I was a little nervous, especially after seeing how good it was. I mean holy crap man this story. This is probably my favorite story already. I'm not even really into feet but it still is. You write without grammatical errors and are more unique with your wordchoice and description than most other authors, and it's only your first upload. You're definitely a lot better at writing than I could ever be. As far as degenerate stuff goes, dude this unkempt/trashy theme you have the character following is crazy hot to me. It's done rarely in other stories, and never this well in my opinion. Definitely my fav part of the story. If you want to stick to feet I'll keep reading to the end for sure, but I'm an assman at heart.
P.S. This review was way over the top so I'll lurk a few chapters before I spam this story more
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you think so highly of my story! It's going pretty well, and I do definitely plan on finishing it, so rest easy. Again, thanks for the encouragement!
[Report This]Date: October 04 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Normally feet bore me since they get so much attention, but your story does it in a way that I enjoy just as much as any other body part, if not more. Would like different interactions, but it's your story and I definitely enjoy it. Will look forward to updates!!
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks for all the great feedback! I definitely get where you're coming from. Even for a die-hard foot fetishist, it gets boring to write about just one sort of experience over and over again. I'm definitely planning to branch out in later chapters.
Date: October 03 2017 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent thus far. Ever going to move from unaware to aware?
Author's Response:
Yup! The new chapters just start switching to the aware parts. Thanks for the comment!
Date: October 02 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lots of potential please keep writing
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouragement!