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Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2017 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great stuff!  I like how she got irritated when he asked her to seek help.  Clearly there's more than meets the eye to this girl.  I'm interested to see where this goes, and great descriptive writing as always.



Author's Response:

I think you might be the first to notice that little bit of foreshadowing! Thanks for the comment!

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