Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2021 8:50 PM Title: Madison's birthday present

always stings to read about little kids losing there lives in these stories. great chapter! so glad you are still working on it 

 

Author's Response:

Thx!
And yes, writing about kids in agony is not a hobby of mine also. I always have to say to myself that its all just fake and that these characters and these happenings do not really exist :)

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2021 5:43 PM Title: Madison's birthday present

this was the first time i ever felt bad for a character dying on this site. rip ashley 

Author's Response:

Thx!
I take that as a compliment.
And yes, writing that piece was hurtful for me as well
Glad its just a story :)

Reviewer: carnage Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2019 11:21 PM Title: Madison's birthday present

Man, I just discovered this story and I am having a tough time making it through it! Every time I try to read it, I quickly bust a nut. It's exhausting! Haha! Awesome work man, I freaking love this story. Keep it up please!

P.S. I loved Sophie's backstory. That chapter was a blast. And she is definetely my favorite character thus far!

Author's Response:

Hahaha, when I started reading your post I was already cracking my mind of what could be wrong about my writing, but than I saw the real reason :)
I take that as a compliment. Because lets be honest, that's what these kind of stories are for!

Great to hear you loved Sophie's story. There is a chance I will add another in a future chapter.

Thanks for the kind words! :)

Reviewer: teamvagisil Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2019 10:19 PM Title: Madison's birthday present

It's Christmas in May! A second offering this month! Great addition! Really looking forward to when Mom shows up and sees what Claire has done and then obviously what happens after the discovery!

Author's Response:

Lol
Thx!

Its nice to hear you regard an update as a gift.
More to come!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2019 7:22 PM Title: Madison's birthday present

hopefully the little ones and Madison will have happier times...

Author's Response:

I hope so too.

All those evil Brobdingnagians...

Reviewer: ibris_107 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 2:14 PM Title: Madison's birthday present

Good day.

Random story, for the inspiration of the author :)

 

tags: hard, sex

Sophie's family, along with Madison and Christel on a walk. Sophie was not easy to force
daughters take a walk, but go to taste a new signature treat at a nearby restaurant
they agreed. Madison sticks to Christel with a request to talk about otneneniya with
Kelvin, did they really break up, how did this happen? But suddenly they notice
that the streets of the city are not at all familiar to them, and are quite different from the usual 
ones.Girls look around anxiously, and passersby begin to draw on them
Attention. Some more attentive passersby came closer looking at them -
they seemed very familiar, but could not remember where they were seen. Girls with her
the sides see a huge room behind the surface of the glass that covered the city, and
stop in shock.Suddenly, a hurried Kelvin jumps out of the close door of the bar, stumbles a look
on the female trio, freezes for a couple of seconds, and suddenly drops its jaw on the asphalt."where are they from?" "l7;l6;m5;kl4;m1; l6;l2;k2;k9;k2;l3;l0;l9;n m0;m1;m0;?" But noticing the situation and staring and 
still not understanding
passers-by, he quickly makes a decision, fits, it seems, and pretty quickly
persuades the trio to go on his car to his home. In the hallway they are
they meet Ashley, and after the explanations Madison goes to her room, to them
Christelle joins and still offended, and Kelvin leads Sophie to her room
for a serious conversation, trying to explain to her how wrong she is in her
actions. But, since playboy Kelvin has a theory that most mental breakdowns
in women comes from lack of sexual attention, the conversation gradually
turns into a prelude to sex. Kelvin knows that most women like
when a partner is confident and persistent, but at the same time does not offend and does not force woman, it is not easy, but Kelvin is confident in his possession of this complex art. He also retains some reverence for this once
a huge and powerful being. Gradually stripping partner, Kelvin
Suddenly notices some points in Sophie's panties, and having considered that this is his attitude is changing. Having spanked Sophie on the ass, Kelvin begins sexual coercion so and changing position, and starting the third time, Christel bursts into the room ...

And then Kelvin wakes up in a cold sweat ...But at the same time, Sophie, Christel and even Madison are waking up. What a nightmare, dream the same ...

It is only after this dream that Sophie suddenly realizes that she likes l4;ozachism more,
than sadism imposed by others.But what could be more humiliating than her taking orders from the tiny midget?

What could happen next? :)

Author's Response:

That's some creative idea you got there ibris!
And I assume with Christel you mean Claire ;)
I've already got a storyline which I'm following and if I would implement such a drastic turn of events this would result in an entirely different story and impossible for me to fix it back in the direction I was planning for.

I do like your idea of a Lilliputian dominating a Brobdingnagian through a dream though. I don't think I've read anything like that before.

Anyway, thanks for taking the time to write a review.
There is more to come!

Reviewer: kilobug Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2018 9:19 PM Title: Madison's birthday present

The ending killed me only because you left a great cliff hanger!!!! I am SO excited to see God Sophie come back. I hope she just goes nuts honestly. She deserves to be their God

Author's Response:

Thx!
Glad you liked to cliffhanger!

Reviewer: Loveherboots Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2018 5:37 AM Title: Madison's birthday present

Forgot to rate the story, sorry about that.

Author's Response: Hey thx for the kind words! Appreciate your trouble to create an account just for my story. There is more on the way I’m a bit busy atm so I cannot guarantee quick updates, but update I will. I love to write and this story is far from over.

Reviewer: Aliakbar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2018 3:04 AM Title: Madison's birthday present

Super story after a long time

Author's Response:

Thx!
Glad you like it!

More on the way for sure :)

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2018 5:43 PM Title: Madison's birthday present

Come on the Human and Liliputen societies are so advanced and with the Lilies be even more so that they haven't synthizined Nerve Agent.  Some Sarin or VX (about 20 gallons worth to be sure) would down any Giant/giantess, Bypasses barriers since it appears to the skin and nerves as something the nerves need, then kills, heck their are mercury compounds even smaller and deadlier and just as able to bypass, if you want to make a point to the giants every time they F with one of you cities they are at best neruolgically crippled at worst every one involved on their side is DEAD!  Your going to lose a 100,000 anyway to Sophie or her daughter might as well make them pay!  Enough dead or crippled Bonbargions and the rest will think twice or not attack at all.  Best play for the tinies and could turn the tide of war for humans.  Basically compounds taking early industrail age tech would hurt and/or kill the largest of giants, it's in their capicity prehaps in this story they will use them.

Author's Response:

Interesting notion those nerve gasses.

Maybe the Lilli's still have something up their sleeve, or maybe not ;)
We will find out.

Thx for the review!
Appreciate it!