Date: September 07 2018 3:14 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Thanks for your reply! And the flowers, I guess? If you continue Saturn Sevenn you see how NOT to do character development. I think I did okay in the genning but it then went everywhere at once, pendulum, all over the place.
I think it is a proven concept to make a character multi facetted, which is super hard to do. I can't do it on purpose, instead ending up making the characters schizophrenic, which then has to be resolved by making them mad.
Author's Response: Lol, flowers :) Your welcome! Well either way, I’m sure your story is great. Thx again for leaving a review on mine ;)
[Report This]Date: September 05 2018 4:50 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Really cool story. I like it. Very believable characters that I'd love to hear more thoughts of. I don't really understand military people ever, but I guess you nailed them too. I'd love to hear more of their thoughts, understand why they do what they do.
There's a bit of an issue with formatting that you could fix. It's all squished together and hard to read and memorize. I jump lines often, even when I use the reader in Firefox. To fix it you can go double enter or something like that, but that sucks. I've found that making the format perfect in Word or Open Office Writer and then just copy-pasting is best. You can not use the preview function that way though, because it fucks up the formatting in the editor. Best of luck, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Its an honor to receive a review from you
And a coincidence :)
Just started reading Saturn Seven a few days ago, ive only read like 3 chapters or so, but it looks very promising.
I always skipped it because I prefer micro/nano stories, but I thought, why don't give it a try, there has to be a reason why his story is so popular :)
I very much appreciate a good piece of writing for my enjoyment as well to learn from it.
I'm glad you mention the characters of my story. I always had the feeling that most readers here prefer raw gts action instead of in-depth and character development.
Nothing wrong with gts action though, but for me personally, a good build up to a climax and the knowledge of a characters intention and such adds some sort of extra dimension to the actual giantess action.
It makes the climax far more exciting. But maybe that's just me.
I will certainly continue reading your story and got a good feeling I can learn a lot of it regarding character development, so thanks for that in advance ;)
Good of you to point out about the formatting, I was never aware of that.
I usually just copy paste, and than use some enters here and there.
Thanks again and there is more to come ;)
Date: May 17 2018 3:52 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Terrific.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: May 17 2018 10:56 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Stories that feature interaction between female brobdingnagians and male lilliputians are so hot. i love this. i see that butt tag, and i hope there's some butt stuff between a adult female brob and a poor tiny male lilly!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!
Date: May 16 2018 12:04 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
First chapter started off promising; like a good multisize pet/owner story with possible unaware elements but then immediately became an incredibly boring and uninteresting mess of "plot" that is both unattactive and totally unnecessesary. It had potential.
Author's Response:
Hey Aaperture, thanks for the honest feedback.
I must say, chapter 2 is the chapter where I am the least proud of indeed.
If I could do it over, I would have definitely chosen for a different approach.
But, on the other hand, Its all part of the progress.
I'm only a novice writer who is very eager to improve his skills.
And feedback like this gives me information of how the reader experiences my story.
I take every review serious, not only the positive ones ;)
Its very helpful!
Date: May 09 2018 2:30 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
I'm liking this story quite a lot! I really can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words Wholia! There is more to come!
[Report This]Date: May 04 2018 1:59 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Love this story. Mentioning them as Gods seems so right! Hope to see more updates. I can't believe I hadn't read this before! The size difference is perfect. Please continue!!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks, for the enthusiastic review! Appreciate it!
The next chapter is already in full progress. I'm bursting with inspiration at the moment!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2017 2:32 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Any info on an update, its been awhile. I would be really bummed if you didnt continue it. :(
Author's Response:
yea it is.
I cant really say when the next update is coming.
Im a bit busy atm.
But no worries, i will definitively continue it!
Nice to hear you like the story!
Date: November 23 2017 3:27 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Bene, un capitolo descrittivo di passaggio ...
Che l'umiliazione abbia inizio ...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it!
Date: November 19 2017 12:35 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Notizia ?
Author's Response:
Here it is!
Date: November 19 2017 7:50 AM Title: Madison's birthday present
Nice beginning!
Can't wait to see the continue story ~
Awesome work!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
appreciate your words!
Date: November 18 2017 6:09 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Love the story but I have a hard time visualizing it, can you ask a 3d artist to make an image it for fun. If not then fine. I hope you continue the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Slacker28!
glad you like it!
What is it exactly what you find hard to visualize?
Is it the characters? or the city?
As goes for the characters, I usually only describe some of their features, but not to much. I want to leave some space for the readers imagination on that part.
I do realize while reading your review, i might be giving some more information about the size difference between the races and the city.
I will work on that and try to be more detailed in the future!
A 3D artist you say? Well, i wont go asking around for such a request out of myself, but if it happen that someone does find it interesting enough to put time in it, I can only feel very honored about that!
Thanks!
Date: November 18 2017 5:53 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Love the story but I have a hard time visualizing it, can you ask a 3d artist to make an image it for fun. If not then fine. I hope you continue the story.
Date: November 17 2017 1:40 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Promettente ...
Molto promettente ...
La mamma e 'molto intrigante ... matura, bella e dominante ... sara' fantastico vederla ridicolizzare gli abitanti della citta '...
Grande , attendo con impazienza il secondo ...
Author's Response:
many thanks 003
LoL, had to use google translate to understand :)
And dont worry, the mother will have a big part in the story!
Thanks for posting a review, appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2017 7:14 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
This is so great so far the writing is amazing and idea is good. already love the intereaction with madison’s mom explaining to her about the city please continue this, will be looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your nice review!
good to hear people like the concept.
There is more to come!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2017 5:29 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
I'd definitely like to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks man!
Appreciate it.
There is definitely more to come!
Date: November 16 2017 2:45 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
It's good. Hope you follow up on it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I will continue for sure. Chapter 2 is on the way!
many thanks for the review.
Love your series too ;)
Date: November 16 2017 1:07 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Well I enjoyed it. I can hardly wait till Madison plays with the city. Will Sophie teach her how to handle the tiny ones? Will Sophie privately talk to the little city and tell them what she expects from them? Sophie's massive hand must be incredible tothem.
Nice start,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Haha, Sophie's hand is definitely a sight to see for them.
Appreciate your kind words!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2017 1:05 PM Title: Madison's birthday present
Awesome premise.
I always love these kind of stories.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
many thanks for the review!