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Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2021 9:10 PM Title: The transport

Nice to see this story is still ongoing.  Still, with how callous brobs are towards smaller races, it's a mystery why they haven't exterminated or enslaved them.  And as for the smaller races, don't they have any ways of fighting back?  At this point, the whole "coexistance" thing kind of falls flat.  The fact that three brob girls can snatch and crush a guli bus full of kids would surley get some outraged reaction from the guli community.

Anyway, looking forward to seeing this mess Sophie has created boil over.  I kind of want to see fight at this point.



Author's Response:

There have been many exterminated or enslaved, but many more are still there. This coexistence has never worked in the first place. It was just a flimsy hope of a portion of society. It has always been wonky.
But who says that those three brob girls dont get reprimanded or even punished for their deeds? Consequences will be there, but it won't stop this tendency of mistrust to one another.
And trust me, it will come to a climax with what Sophie has set in motion. I know. this story is a slow burn, but that's what I like about it.
My other stories are more fast paced, but I like to keep this one at a slug's pace. It gives me room to zoom in on certain aspects and to give more depth with certain characters and their sidestories.

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