Thanks for the quick reply. I reread the chapters and they were along the lines of what I was thinking about. It must be why it was stuck in my head. Glad to hear your going to be using the concept more in the future as I really enjoy reading it as a story setting.

Since my last suggestion kind of was already done I have another this one for Sarah. The sugestion is telling exactly where does Sarah get all the food supplies she uses besides the tinnes in her cooking. There was some mention that the Goddess wasn't sure where Sarah sourced some things in chapter 17 and I didn't really see anything since so maybe she finaly remembers this and decides to follow her to see where the produce is coming from. 

Sarah could have whole agriworlds setup to grow the fruits and vegetables possibly with humans fighting  wars against giant sized pests to keep them away from the equally giant sized produce. The tiny humans can ensure that not even the tinest imperfection goes unnoticed with only the imaculate produce being harvested. There could even be factories setup to proccess things into finished goods like the milk from millions of cows being proccessed into a single bucket of icecream or grinding down giant coffee beans to make filters or instant coffee packets. 

The other option I was thinking of is she goes from grocier store to grocier store on different planets picking up the different ingredents on each with no one knowing who she really is when she is shopping. A possible difficutly with this option is getting caught up while another maid is going through the proccess of punishing a planet for some reason and Sarah still must go through with getting the ingredents even though the world is going crazy all around her because it is a crucial part of a meal planned for the Goddess lster and there is no time to go to another planet.

She could also do a combination of both since maybe somethings can only be grown on one planet.

Keep up the great work.

I've only recently discovered this story, but god, do I love it! I went through almost everything in less than a day.

I really enjoyed the impressive displays of divine power and the cruelty only added to the overall experience. And you're really good at describing the brutality in high detail, especially in interactions with individuals, however destruction scenes don't seem to enjoy the same amount of detail. Not that this is really bad - I just thought of them lacking, but that might be my odd preference.

I feel you'd also like to hear a bit about your writing style, but I'm not good enough to give you proper feedback; all I can say is that it was easy to read, and you describe scenes very well.

Either way, are you still looking for suggestions? I'd be curious how you'd write something closer to a horror story/chapter... Generally I'd be happy with anything that actually terrifies the reader (but if you'd need a more specific suggestion, I'd go with some really devoted believer doing something that rubs the Goddess the wrong way, but that doesn't quite warrant death [idk, a renowned artist designing a misrepresenting mural of the Goddess to be chiseled into a mountain range, maybe?], and to teach them a lesson, the Goddess joins their dream and turns it into a nightmare? ... Though if that's not really fitting for this story, maybe it'd make for an alright chapter in the maid side-story? You'll know better.)

In any case, I just hope that you carry on writing in general - I've loved everything you've uploaded here so far, and I'm looking forward to more, no matter what it looks like.

If this is your first attempt then this is really really good! I would say you are a natural.

As for requests, it would also be interesting to dig into her origin story a bit more

I think i already left a comment here, but want to say it again: Great work! Its by far my favorite story here and to be perfectly honest, captures my fantasy quite accurate xD Some suggestions if you can be bothered :3

- 3rd Maid that survived years on the floor and is now discovered and trained to be the 3rd maid

- More holidays from charlottes perspective!

- Cass and Sarah getting charlotte's omnipotence for 1 day to play together

Wha does charlotte look like ? Can umdescribe?

Author's Response:

https://giantesscharlotte.deviantart.com/gallery/

I greatly enjoyede the first Chapter. The Festival tributes destiny in the giant bath was simply amazing. Would have been nice if perhaps more fine detail added to Charlotte's activity before, during and after her bathtime! Things like what she did with her Tributes, in detail, their reactions to the same from their POV. The sounds, sights, colors and finer nuances of the scene in Charlotte's private fun time in her ornate bathroom. Perhaps re-visit this scenaro in a future chapter, with double or triple the number of Tributes and perhaps a second bigge additional royal marble bathtub! Perhaps even one in which she can re-visit her later winemaking experiment combining her Humanity Bath with some grapes harvested from the vineyards tossed in along with her tributes!  

how long did it take to make?

Author's Response:

How long did what take to make? My first story was on the 5th and i added one every other day or so. These take me between 2 and 4 hours depending on length.
I just wish I got some feedback so I could improve my writing :D These are my first attempt at story writing.