Date: December 27 2017 5:47 PM Title: The rare new story!
Now this is getting interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter, so I'll read it now.
I woldn't have any trouble, if I were Ken, staying there forever.
Author's Response: careful the story took a sex detour!
Date: December 26 2017 5:26 PM Title: The next story!
This may actually be one of your best chapters. Spelling's good, syntax is proper. Can't comment on paragraph separation since I'm on phone so it all looks squished together regardless.
Author's Response: Thank you and i added to it!