[Report This]Date: January 05 2019 5:49 PM Title: Queen of the World
I really like the setting of this one, it does have potential, and expanding it into a separate story (or writing a new one set in the same universe, treating Vanessa's tale as a prologue) strikes me as a good idea. The Queen herself is a pretty interesting character, simultaneusly caring about peace and indifferent towards even thousands of deaths caused by her actions. Moreover, her unexplained origin adds a nice touch of mystery, making the reader yearn for answers. I would gladly see, where you take it from here.
Good luck!
Author's Response:
Oh all the requests, the most difficult !
Firs tthings first, thanks for the review. I can't guarantee I'll return to this world, because I kind of like where it is right now and I'm afraid that trying to develop it more could backfire. But I'll keep this in mind, and I may add some one-shots in there or something :)