[Report This]Date: January 15 2018 6:21 AM Title: Morning Routine
I really love how casual she is about all this, she's adorable~ I wonder if she has any conveniently cute Asian friends hm hmmm!
She seems like someone I'd love to be best friends with in real life! I need someone to counter my quietness.
Have you considered having her shrink others too? Or like shrinking Mike so that a girl appears giant to her but still tiny to Kelly? Possibilities are endless and that's what I love about it.
Keep it up, it's fast paced enough to get to the action but stays in all the right places!
Author's Response:
The very next chapter will have a group shrinking. And, she does have a conveniently cute Asian friend who will be in the next chapter. If you want, I can change her name to Lily?
I also really enjoy your stories as well!
Date: January 15 2018 2:03 AM Title: Morning Routine
Another great chapter. Given her admitting to liking view, I'd like a chapter where she toys with and swallows him whole.
Author's Response:
I've toyed around with it but am on the fence about it. She likes playing with him but knowing he will experience that may be a bit meaner than she wants to. Right now at least. Maybe at a later point in the story.
Date: January 11 2018 11:02 AM Title: Morning Routine
Loving this and the concept, really hoping to see more. The pocket reality idea is fun, let's you do a wide variety of scenarios, and without her actually being a murdering psychopath.
Plus with him knowing and her happy about that, I just love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really enjoy the prospects the pocket reality offers. I hope you continue enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: January 11 2018 6:37 AM Title: Morning Routine
Just wanting to say... I love your characters and their interactions so far ! Keep going at it I want to read MOAR !
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I intend to keep going for a bit with it. The characters are a lot of fun to write.
Date: January 09 2018 10:55 PM Title: Morning Routine
Really like how Kelly enjoys her omnipotence. It's not going mad with power so much as a casual why not and makes her cute. I imagine she would conjure a city just to ignore it as she pays attention to something mundane.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking how Kelly is handling things so far. Casual and fun is what I'm going for with her view of things. I actually do have something like you suggested planned out! So I hope you enjoy that! Like she would shrink a city but then suddenly remember she has homework and forget it's there until later.
Date: January 06 2018 8:05 PM Title: Morning Routine
Wow, great start. I'm guessing that the girl is Kelly, or else I'm just really stupid :P
I'm hoping we see some interaction between the two in some later chapters if you're open to that suggestion!
Author's Response:
Oh definitely. The third chapter is mostly dialogue with them. I'm glad you're liking it so far!