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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2018 10:50 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

I hope you didn't skip my review because the review above mine got a reply.

Author's Response: Oh no, definitely wouldn’t skip yours. Just had to think about my reply. Short and sweet.

Reviewer: baaronz12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2018 6:50 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

At first I was disappointed that Sue Ann would not be taking care of Chris as she was beautifully decscribed in the early chapters. As these chapters go on, however, I find myself more enticed with Shannon and her desires to the point that I want to be in Chris' shoes. 

 

Fantastic story, keep up the great work!



Author's Response: Thank you for your review: I hope you stay tuned and enjoy what’s to come. I do have plans for Sue Ann later in the story, but I’m still hashing out the details. If you have anything you’d like to see, don’t hesitate to ask. Thanks for reading!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review: I hope you stay tuned and enjoy what’s to come. I do have plans for Sue Ann later in the story, but I’m still hashing out the details. If you have anything you’d like to see, don’t hesitate to ask. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2018 1:37 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

Thank for such an awesome response to my review!

I'm really excited for what you have planned out. I hope those chapters come soon.

I also like how you introduced Rachel's mother. I'm actually interested in her too. In fact, I think I might like Rachel's mother even better than Shannon or Rachel. (Will Rachel's mother have a slim/fit figure?)

I'm hoping she is one of those single moms who miss their husband and will crave Chris once she sees him. If Sue Ann doesn't show up soon, hopefully Rachel's mother does. That could be fun.

Hey, now I got someone else to root for. Back to following this story, please don't jinx it. Lol.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: You’re very welcome! I do appreciate and always look forward to your reviews.

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2018 5:22 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

for some reason i think of sue ann as the enormous brested women and think shannon is the low key thick kinda girl. im starting to see shannon as the kind of type of women that ks trying to gain chris trust just so she can stuff him in her pussy. Man i wish this whould happen in real life. oh well a person can dream.



Author's Response: If it helps, picture Sue Ann as someone who has natural beauty, but accentuates it slightly. Remember, Sue Ann is not much taller than Shannon and somewhat slim. I don’t really picture her as some big-breasted, perky supermodel; she’s more of a 30 yr old mix between Star Hughes and Shailene Woodley. Shannon, on the other hand, is more analogous to a plus-size model, but carries more of her weight in her breasts and butt rather than her stomach. If you reread some of the chapters carefully, you’ll start getting an idea of Shannon’s motives, but that’s all I’ll say for now. As for wishing it would happen in real life, don’t we all!

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2018 1:53 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

I love this story so much that i come back here everyday to see if you added another chapter. you are one of the best writers on here and I thank you for that.

Its weird i never realy liked vore but reading this story is starting to make me like it. 

I also wanted to ask coud youpossibly add some sex stuff with chris and rachel. 

once agin I love your storys and i urge you to keep writing because you are one of the best writers on this site and dont let anyone tell you diffrentily.



Author's Response: Normally, I will try to add one chapter per week and will tell everyone ahead of time about any breaks I take. I fully intended to finish this story, one chapter at a time, as I hate unfinished stories on this site. I will say that you will see Rachel and Sue Ann again, but no details yet. I thank you for your praise and loyal readership. Keep checking back for more!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2018 7:20 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

Great to see some unaware stuff! Wonderful! 



Author's Response: “Unaware” is one my favorite genres, so I have some in all of my stories. This story makes it a little difficult to have unaware scenarios, but I made a way....and trust me, there are more to come!

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2018 1:22 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

man i love the flash. um do you think when you are done making this story could you make another one like this one but without the vore please for the people that are not in to that stuff please.



Author's Response: I have a few stories in the works; each with a variety of scenarios. I’m pretty sure that I can oblige you. Hope you’re enjoying the story so far.

Reviewer: Andresublime Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2018 7:33 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

la historia fue buena, pero quiero saber si voy a ver algún capítulo de Vore



Author's Response: Que puedo confirmar, allí estará!

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2018 1:23 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

you are one of the best writers out there and thank you for writing for us. When shannon sad she found a way for him to swim i thought she was going to put water in her navel and let chris swim in it. but once agagin thank you for writing such great storys for us the giantess community and welcome to the giantess community



Author's Response: Thank you. I’m really glad you appreciate my work. I’m so overwhelmed by the positive reviews and read number! I’ve wanted to be a writer for a long time and this presented the perfect opportunity to try my hand. This may have been my first story, but I can promise you it won’t be my last. I will say that I’m currently working on two other large stories and a couple of short ones with unique characters of my own creation, so stay tuned for more to come.

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 2:52 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

is he really going to get eaten and digested because i would like you to have chris in other storys



Author's Response: Unfortunately, when you’re that small, the world is a much different and dangerous place; death is extremely likely, especially when you’re giantess babysitter isn’t being careful.

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 2:31 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

cann you add Sue Ann later on in the book or in a diffrent story please



Author's Response: I’ll take it under advisement 😉. Just keep checking back!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2018 5:48 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

Omg. This story is freakin amazing!! Lots of booty and lots of gas lol and the vivid detail to this story is spectacular! If I could give this an 11 I would!! Please keep the chapters SUPER long and with lots of detail, booty, and GAS! lol maybe she'll order Mexican food... worse than chili haha 😈🍑💨

Author's Response: I’m glad you like it so far. There will be more scenarios to come, with a wide variety for everyone’s tastes, including a few that may never have been seen or explored before. At least one chapter or new story will be posted each week. Check back for more!

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2018 6:57 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

Very nice! The dialgue between Chris and Shannon is well written and believable.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: I will always shoot for some amount of realism in my stories, despite their fictional nature. Check back each week for more!

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2018 2:50 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

love shannon's giant farting ass. please keep writing. maybe chris gets sexua awakening with her giant farts!



Author's Response: Technically, he already had his awakening with another older woman, but you’ll see just how much his attitude changes as he story progresses. Check back each week for new chapters!

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2018 2:45 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

this story is amazing please keep writing and updating this story. from your first fan chase



Author's Response: Plan to add new chapter(s) weekly. Will also post original “short” stories and other novels at a later date.

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