I didn't review the last chapter becuase I just wasn't into that kind of content. I know other readers may enjoy it, buts it not exactly my cup of tea. It's good to have some variety, so I don't mind. Better than me just complaining about it. Lol.

This chapter was more fun to read. The creativeness about the car ride and where Shannon got the shrinking stuff. That was good.

Isn't this the second time Shannon is going to eat him? At this point it seems kinda predictable that she won't eat him. Especially since you used the same cliffhanger before.

Also, it's been so long since we saw Sue Ann. She was there in the first chapter and that was the best part of this story and I keep scratching my head, wondering why won't you bring her back into the story. Then in your response to another review, you mentioned her being a combo of Star Hughes and Shailene Woodly. I had no idea who Star Hughes was, but wow, she is georgeous. Now I'm very anxious for Sue Ann to make an appearance soon.

Well, I'm not sure if I'm going to keep reviewing this story without Sue Ann, becuase these last few chapters seem very repetitive. If it was Sue Ann doing these sexy things on repeat, I probably wouldn't mind, but I think personally I'm getting a little tired of Shannon, especially when my favorite giantess hasn't even shown up to play with Chris lately.

Author's Response: I wanted this story to have a little bit of everything, something for everybody to enjoy. This does mean that there may be some chapters that some prefer to others, but that’s just how it is. While I do like the end of my chapters to have some kind of cliffhanger, sometimes the chapters start getting a bit long, so it’s hard to find just the right place to end them. I will say that this is the part of the story that will be the hardest for me to write: Shannon and Chris both want to keep his shrinking a secret, so neither is motivated to seek out unwanted attention. For that reason, I want the next several chapters to go through the next days somewhat quickly. As you can tell by the reviews, many people want Sue Ann back, along with other characters; I’ve been reluctant to give away too many details, but if it will increase readership, I’ll give you a slight preview. SPOILER ALERT: I said in the beginning of the story that initially Sue Ann was supposed to watch Chris this week, but she had to cancel. The reason was hinted at in that same chapter: Sue Ann runs several side businesses and one of them came into conflict with watching Chris, she will show up later in the week once her business is concluded, along with Rachel AND her mother (for those who like the 40yr old giantess type). This is why I want to get through the next couple of days quickly, those are going to be the really exciting parts. I want to give as much time with each character as possible while still staying true to the heart of the story. For now, I thank you immensely for your feedback and urge you to keep reading. Hopefully, you’ll have a positive experience in the end!