[Report This]Date: October 27 2023 9:37 PM Title: Alternate Chapter 10–What if Chris ended up with Rachel?
Hello there, I've been reading some of your stuff for a long while now and I really liked this chapter especially.
Not just because of the reference of the movie, (which was an awesome touch btw) but the interaction that Rachel and Chris had with each other. It really had my mind picture how the story would go if you continued doing the story with Rachel, and honestly I'm surprised nobody had done fanart for the story at all. And I'm planning a story for myself based on a roleplay me and another are doing right now
it is completely different from this and has a very bigger plot story into
So the one best thing I'm trying to say, please continue writing awesome stories like this because its what's inspiring me to become a better writer in a way
Wish you great luck my man
Author's Response:
Well, I always appreciate the feedback and read count. I think, if I had to do it over again, Rachel would play a bigger role in the story than I initially planned. In any case, I think it was a reader suggestion that led me to this alternate chapter with Rachel; it gave me a chance to play out a little of the scenario, and practice writing a couple of shrunken interactions that I plan on using in the future.
I still have plenty more stories to write, it just has been taking me longer to write lately.
[Report This]Date: December 25 2018 8:36 PM Title: Alternate Chapter 10–What if Chris ended up with Rachel?
This was a really good chapter! I liked the way this alternate version went, and it'd be neat to see more like this of the other characters, if you're planning on doing that. It'd be cool to see an alternate chapter where Noreen actually gets to take care of Chris back when she originally discovers him, if you're taking suggestions for more alternate stuff.
I'm not sure if I just don't like Shannon much as a character, but the story is clearly well written, so I'm always glad when somebody else gets some time in the spotlight.
It's your story so focus on whoever you want to focus on, so please don't think I'm just complaining. I just thought it was an opinion that might not be as common.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Well, if you recall, I posted a reader challenge a few weeks ago and Rachel won the alternate chapter. However, you aren’t the only one who wants to see an alternate story arc with Noreen. When I post another reader challenge, feel free to vote for a chapter with Noreen. Ultimately, I will probably end up doing an alternate chapter with each of the main characters, and maybe even a chapter with Shannon growing into a giantess. Thanks for reading and the review!