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Reviewer: Ride Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2023 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 37

I like the story, but this is by far the best chapter you've ever written. Well done!



Author's Response:

Well, thank you. I’m curious as to why you liked this particular chapter so much? Whether it be the unaware scenario, or Chris being brushed away like a piece of dirt.

Anyway, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Moe Moe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2019 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 37

This is one of my favorite series on this site. Even when this amazing stoy finishes, I hope you continue the good work!



Author's Response: Thank you for your readership. I have several more stories in the works, including several more novellas and short stories. If you haven’t seen it already, check out my short story “Honey, Don’t Squish Me!” also published on this site. Also, I am accepting commissions, so if you have any custom requests, feel free to contact me.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2019 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 37

I’m really happy to see where this story is going! Chris is finally at Rachel’s house while tiny!

Now Chris is forced to take shelter in her house because that’s where she left him.

I’m also glad you made this scene unaware. Usually I’m a big “aware” fan, but I think I like it when Rachel does the unaware stuff. Therefore, we can save the aware moments with her mother. :)

I’m also curious if Chris has grown recently. Is he still half an inch tall? Or is he taller? Would love to see him reach around 2 inches around Mrs. Carson. But if he meets her earlier, that could also be fun too.

Lol, who walks barefoot to their neighbors house? I understand that Rachel could have been anxious to see Chris, so she forgot, but I think it’s funny. Inside her house, I can see Rachel walking barefoot much more often.

Perhaps, Chris might also get a glimpse of Mrs. Carson as a giantess for the first time. I would love to see his reaction.

I’m so excited! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I can honestly tell you that this was where the story was heading since the beginning, it just took a while to get there. There are several things that are going to happen over the next few chapters, but that’s all I’ll say for now.
Chris is still only around an 1/8th of an inch tall. This is smaller than you may expect, but it facilitates certain unaware interactions and renders calling for help useless.
If I didn’t paint the environment properly, Rachel’s and Chris’s houses are situated so that their backyards are actually adjoining, so that’s why Rachel simply walked over barefoot, it was grass the whole way. Rachel’s backyard also has a small fenced in area for her dog, Chloe, to run around in.
As far as what’s going to happen in Rachel’s home, some things will be expected, but others unexpected, so don’t be too disappointed if things don’t go exactly how you plan.
As always, thanks for the review!

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