[Report This]Date: February 05 2019 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 38
Lol, the whole dog perspective was.... well I have no idea. It was unique, that’s for sure. I don’t think I ever would have wrote about what a dog things of a little guy.
Glad to see Chris get a glimpse of giantess Mrs. Carson in yoga pants. Wish he had more time to admire her, haha.
“Tumbled to his death”? That means he died. And I don’t think you meant that. Maybe “tumbled down below” “tumbled to his doom” “tumbled into dangerous waters” Anything that shows danger, but not death.
I like how you involve feet with Rachel. To me, this can only mean you are saving the other juicy parts with another giantess and I think I know who will that be. :)
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: 1) As I said, this part of the story deals with the perceptions of many different characters as the events play out, which, in this case, includes dogs.
2) I know you only caught a glimpse of Mrs. Carson, but trust me, you’ll see more of her later.
3) OK, maybe I could’ve used different wording, but I didn’t want to spend too much time wording a single sentence. Maybe once I’m all done, I’ll go back and proofread the whole story.
4) I have said that Rachel is serving a very special purpose in this story, and it’s not just to be a teenaged giantess, though that comes with the territory.
I hope you like how the story turns out. Thanks for reading!
Date: February 04 2019 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 38
Is this the end? If not, I'm really enjoying this turn of events hope more stuff happens with Rachel.
Author's Response: Well, all I can say is that there’s still lots of story left, but you’ll definitely see lots more of Rachel and Sue Ann before it’s all over.
Date: February 04 2019 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 38
Nice chapter. Hope he doesn't actually die. But is it bad that I hope Chris gets sucked down the drain, but still lives. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, Chris is quite the survivor, so anything’s possible.