I love this story so much! Keep up the good work!

This chapter felt long, which is awesome. The word count seems the same, but it took more time for me to read. Maybe my reading skills got worse.


With more fun chapters coming up, I would love to see more lengthy chapters paired up with the fun.

Speaking of fun. I hope this story is going where I think it’s going. Rachel taking pile of clothes to laundry room and Mrs. Carson takes over after noticing how sad Rachel is. Mrs. Carson inspects her daughter’s clothing and laundry just out of curiosity. She opens up the towel and sees a brown spot in the middle, with the clear white outline of what appears to be a tiny human. It looks similar to a crime scene where chalk outlines where a dead body was.

Meanwhile Chris heard the voice of Mrs. Carson humming as she did the laundry. Not wanting to be caught in her daughter’s laundry, he waited for the towel to open up and he managed to slide toward the floor without her noticing.

Chris looks around and notices how small the laundry room is and the only escape is behind Mrs. Carson. At what a sight she is. No wonder why he likes Rachel so much. She got her looks from her mother who is currently wearing some yoga pants and tight sleeveless shirt revealing her sexy curves. While Rachel was definitely cute, her mom has a body to die for, especially with that hourglass figuere. Chris was tempted to reveal himself to her just now. “Not yet” he tells himself.

With the giantess in the way, he slowly approaches her feet and makes a plan to climb her foot. He arrives and can smell the aroma rising from her feet. Much stronger than Rachel’s but not as bad as Shannon’s. Chris climbs on and waits.

Mrs. Carson finished her and Rachel’s laundry and walks out without noticing the tiny Chris on her foot. Chris hangs on for dear life hoping to not get noticed. The thrill of riding her foot and the danger of falling out is turning Chris on. All of a sudden, he body begins to grow. “No, no, no! Not now!” Chris exclaims, worried that Mrs. Carson would notice.

Mrs. Carson heads back to her favorite reading chair and sits down. She crosses her legs and her right foot is dangling, the one Chris is on. He begins feeling dizzy and hears Mrs. Carson say “alright chapter 1.” Chris knew this would last a while. A fall from this height might break something, so his only option is to climb Mrs. Carson. He looks up toward the rest of her magnificent body and begins his ascent...

Stay tuned for more!

Author's Response: Be careful, or you might just wind up writing this story for me.😉
Believe it or not, I was worried this chapter might be too short, but it had a lot of action packed into it. I really hope you don’t mind the long string of scenarios; someone else harkened it to “spaghetti”. And, the action’s going to be nonstop for a bit. So buckle up and enjoy the read!