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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2019 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 43

Nice chapter. Cris is about to return to the shower with Mrs. Carson. Is it bad that I hope that Chris gets seperated from Mrs. Carson before she goes over to Shannon so that there can be more unaware with others besides Shannon?

Author's Response: I think you’ll be surprised with where the story goes from here, especially with the next couple of chapters. Although we haven’t seen much of Shannon lately, it’ll definitely be an interesting exchange between the two older women. So for now, stay tuned and thanks for reading.

Author's Response: I think you’ll be surprised with where the story goes from here, especially with the next couple of chapters. Although we haven’t seen much of Shannon lately, it’ll definitely be an interesting exchange between the two older women. So for now, stay tuned and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2019 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 43

Man, I miss this story! Was not expecting an update, but I check this website everyday for all my favorite stories including this one.

Arguably the funniest chapter so far. The way Janet was shutting down all hole for Chris actually made me smile. I didn’t want Chris to be found this chapter and was pleased that he was kept to Mrs. Carson the whole time.

If anyone loves feet, these last few chapters must feel like a gold mine. While I would usually complain, you managed to keep it interesting with the dialogue between Rachel and her mom. The part where Rachel talked about her crush on Chris made me laugh. It’s also interesting because Chris kind of likes Rachel, so I bet Chris is excited to know his crush likes him.

Are we about to have another shower scene? Now that’s awesome. Would be better if Janet scrubs her body with Chris too. Like daughter, like mother.

One thing I’m a bit worried about is Janet’s visit to Shannon. If Chris ends up with Shannon, I would be pretty disappointed because I thought this phase would be mostly about Rachel and Mrs. Carson. And so far Chris has been mostly under these women so far, haha.

Please tell me Chris somehow avoids Shannon. We know Chris hates Shannon and Shannon is deliberately searching for him, so the safest bet is to stick with Janet.

I do wonder how the conversation with Janet and Sharon would go. I doubt Janet will be as persistent as Rachel, but it would be funny to see Shannon fend off another person. First Noreen, then Sue Ann, then Rachel, and now her mom.

I forgot to write up some suggestions and respond to your response last time, so hopefully I manage to create some discussions this time. Also, when is Chris going to grow again? Been same size since 2019 I think, haha.

Anyway, I’m glad you are back and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Trust me when I say that Chris still has some time with Mrs. Carson. I’m glad you liked the mother-daughter conversation; this was a rather important chapter moving forward, so I needed to intermingle some plot development along with the juicy stuff. As I said before, Rachel will play a very important role in the story going forward, and I think you’re beginning to see it. Personally, I like how it’s all tying together and I’m sure you’ll like where it ends up.

The tension with Shannon having to fend of the curiosity of each character is about to reach the breaking point, and she’s going to make a decision that affects the outcome of the story, but that’s all I’ll say for now.

In all honesty, I wasn’t really planning on another shower scene, but I think I may know how to work one in. All I can say moving forward is things probably won’t go the way you think over the next several chapters.

Reviewer: Moomoomilk Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2019 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 43

Been really enjoying all the unaware content with Rachel and her mom, would love to see some mouthplay or watersports somehow incoporated :)



Author's Response: Well, I’ll certainly see what I can do moving forward; however, if mouth play is what you like, jump back to chapters 11 and 12 for some unaware mouthplay with Shannon. Or, check out the alternative chapter 10 with some playful mouthplay with Rachel.

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