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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2019 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 44

This might be the best chapter in the story so far! It was so unexpected! I thought it was going to be a simple shower scene, but no, this was the bed scene that I was waiting for!

What’s funny is that you actually had Chris stuck inside her vagina. I wasn’t sure you were going to go that far, but you did and I love it! This is also probably the smallest Chris has been while inside a vagina. I think he should grow soon. Has been this small for a long time now. Can’t wait for Mrs. Carson to feel him inside her.

Excellent description of how Chris got stuck to the top of the dildo. In the past, sometimes it wasn’t as clear, if this chapter was excellent. I understood how he was on the mattress, then he got stuck to the underside of her foot, then she held the dildo with both her feet so Chris just got transferred to the stickier surface which was the dildo. Now, he is on the side of the dildo, but I love how Janet slid her hand up and down, dragging Chris to the top of the dildo and setting him right there on the front row seat.

So if Chris is dislodged, he is stuck inside Mrs. Carson’s pussy. I wasn’t expecting him inside there at this size, but I will take it. I wonder how long Chris will stay inside there. Will he grow inside it, like a baby ready to be born? Will Janet take him to Shannon’s place with Chris inside her?

I mean, wow, shrinker82, this chapter was amazing, and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you liked it. I’ve been working on and editing this for some time and I’m happy with the finished product. As I’ve said, this story probably won’t go in the direction you anticipate; there are plenty of plot twists along the way. I did have to rework a few things to facilitate the next couple of chapters, but I think I’ve found a direction that suits me.

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