Yes! Another chapter! I love how Chris had a little memory loss as the dildo rammed him up Mrs. Carson’s vagina. It was funny to see him believe it was Noreen’s body and her bathroom. Then the memories flooded back in and he remember Janet and her intimate experiences with him.

I think Chris is still too small for Janet to feel him. Then again, I don’t know how sensitive a vagina is, but 1/8 of an inch is pretty small and once again, he has been this size for way too long now. Anxious for some growth soon. At least a little bit.

A drain pipe! Man, you scared me when you had Chris sent down there. I thought he would be transported out of the house and into Shannon’s hands. Glad he stayed in the house.

Lol, gotta love the Rachel dream. She even herd squeaking while doing laundry and didn’t even think of Chris? I thought she would and maybe shrug it off.

Well, I love this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Believe it or not, there is so much to your review, that I want to address each part individually:

You and several readers wanted another shower scene, so I needed to do some brainstorming on how to make it unique, rather than just a rehash of the prior scene. I chose to focus on the differences between mother and daughter for inspiration: Janet’s maturity allowed for a bit more erotic experience, as opposed to Rachel, who is much more innocent. Also, the dream sequence with Noreen allowed for bringing that scene to reality, so I thought it was a perfect callback.

I’ll fully admit that I took some artistic license with how sensitive a woman’s vagina is, but I’m a big fan of a tiny person being trapped inside a woman while she orgasms. And I also thought that Chris being squirted out of Janet made for a funny scene.

I felt the drain was the only way that scene could end. But the issue was how could Chris go down the drain, and me have a story go where I want to go. For reasons I can’t spoil yet, Chris needed to stay in the Carson home, and a drain pipe under the laundry room was my compromise. In addition, I didn’t want him to be with Mrs. Carson when she confronted Shannon, but that’s all I’ll say for now.

I’m honestly not sure where the inspiration for Rachel’s dream came from, but it probably had something to do with the alternate chapter I wrote with her. Furthermore, I wanted Chris to have another encounter with Rachel, so him calling from the drain seemed appropriate.