Shannon wants to keep Chris tiny forever apparently, and this new Ray dude, Shannon will probably use Chris while she have some fun with Ray I can only imagine, don't know if she'll be able to accomplish her plan, but if she do well Chris will have to accept his fate once and for all.

Wow, I never realized that so many chapters actually occurred in one day. It made me realize how fast things happen in your story.

It’s also crazy that Chris’s parents will return Saturday as while that seems very close, I’m sure there will be plenty of chapters until then.

I like the increased drama this chapter. The stakes have dramatically increased. Janet knows about Shannon, Sue Ann is already into her, and now Chris’s mom is onto Shannon.

If I was Shannon, I would admit that I lost track of Chris, or he ran away and didn’t want to get blamed for it. Maybe someone will believe her, but it’s better than saying nothing and continue this “sick” story. Lol.

I also like how Rachel knows about her mother knowing about Chris’s situation. I think it would be great for her to tell her mom about her dreams and connect it to the dog sniffing their feet. While Rachel may not put the pieces together, I believe Mrs. Carson is smart enough to think of it, even if she won’t believe it right away.

Also, let’s not forget Chris is still stuck in that drain in the laundry room. I expect Janet to return there soon, perhaps making sure Rachel got the clothes or something.

In addition, Shannon mentioned Chris’s position would wear off soon. I mentioned this countless times, and I know only a few days have passed, but I still think Chris is supposed to grow slowly and I think a little growth spurt is due soon. Maybe he grows and pops out of the drain, I’m not sure. Would love to see him reach an inch soon so he is at least able to be seen by the giantesses.

The whole “shrink and keep someone forever” is one of the sexiest themes there is on giantess world and I love how you included it. While I would rather have another giantess say it, it fits Shannon’s character completely.

Shannon’s plan involves keeping Chris forever, but that includes finding him. Chris doesn’t want to be with Shannon and no one wants to let Shannon be with Chris. So I have no idea how Chris winds up back with Shannon, and I hope it’s not anytime soon. Haha.

I reread my suggestion from a past review about a 2 foot tall Chris being used by Mrs. Carson and the crazy part was that that review was in August. Crazy how time flies. Hopefully Chris grows a little in no time as well.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: 1) Yes, I didn’t realize either how many chapters occur on the same day. The first 11 chapters take place entirely on the first day! We are getting through the week, but so much happens on a day to day basis. There are still a few more chapters to go, but trust me, we are approaching the end.
2) It true that this chapter was more about plot development and less about “encounters”, but it’s a rather important one. I needed this chapter to focus on the other characters instead of Chris, especially getting back to what Shannon’s been up to. As more people suspect her, Shannon becomes more desperate, and things are starting to unravel.
3) I’m actually exploring more and more how Rachel reacts as events unfold. I think she may play an even bigger part than initially anticipated.
4) The potion will start to wear off again, and both Chris and Shannon know it, which is obviously why she needs another supply. She’s doesn’t want to tell anyone about Chris predicament, and has only told “Ray” the bare minimum. I will say that the “shrink and keep him forever” theme was always going to be my endgame. Will it work?
Lastly, it has been a long time since I started the story, and there are several tiny details I seeded into certain chapters. Those details will start to come to light in the next few chapters, leading up to the big conclusion, but we’ve still got a ways to go!