Just wanted to thank you for all your work in building an actual story, with such wonderful cast of characters. I must say you are very talented, knowing how to use the fetish parts without losing sight of the development of your characters and the plot. Once again, thank you. Hoping to see Rachel and cia. strugling to protect and even interact with a very tiny Chris in a giantess world XDD. 

Yes! I love how this chapter ended up! I had my doubts that Shannon might shrink him, but after reading about Ray’s story, I thought they both had a deep connection.

Turns out, only Ray was the one who loved Shannon that much. Shannon just wants to use Ray for the formula. I don’t mind if Shannon keeps Ray while another sexy giantess keeps Chris. I was never a big fan of the Shannon and Chris relationship, but I love this on with Ray.

Ray loves her so it won’t be so bad for him, and the way he struggles is so much more entertaining than Chris in Shannon’s hands. Chris gives up too easily, but whenever he is around the other giantesses, he provides more effort and I think Chris just likes the other women more. (Or maybe that’s just me.)

I don’t blame you for taking a month for this masterpiece of a chapter. It almost doubled your word count, but it was well worth it. The chapter was so fleshed out and you included so many details.

Now that Ray is taken care of, the focus will be back on Chris. The question would be who finds Chris first? If it’s Shannon, well, the story would probably end right there with 2 sex slaves for her. If it’s Rachel, she will hide Chris but probably nothing sexual happens much between them. I think she will friend zone him. For Mrs. Carson, I think she is the best option because eventually she would show Chris to Rachel, but not right away since Mrs. Carson May have a few questions and things she wants to explore. ;) I think some unaware pleasure leading her to find him will make her believe he is a naughty boy. I could go on and on from here, but not today. Haha.

Anyway, I love this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it. I knew exactly what I wanted to have happen in this chapter, but it took me a while to get all the details and dialogue just how I wanted. Describing Ray’s backstory was especially important; if I had the entire story to do over again, this is probably how I would have introduced all the characters, that way you get a look at both their psychological and physiological profiles. The dialogue between Shannon and Ray is what took the longest: I wanted their conversations to be intimate and believable, and for it to flow naturally. Now that Shannon’s planning her escape, Chris has no idea how much trouble he’s really in.