Reviewer: Sheograth Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 50

I've been enjoying the past few chapters of Chris being away from Shannon, but this one has definitely been my favorite so far. All of the unaware stuff with Sue Ann has just been awesome, and I'm looking forward to what happens now that she found Chris.

Side question, but have you ever considered creating a text adventure with based on this story? You have a solid cast of characters.

Either way, take care and good luck!

Author's Response: Right now, Sue Ann has just found tiny Chris. As far as the dynamic between them, Sue Ann is basically a sweetheart and would never do anything to hurt him, especially in his current state. Expect to see some gentle giantess interactions.

I haven’t considered any text adventures with these characters, but I do have, and am enjoying— the alternate chapters. If you haven’t read the latest on with Mrs. Carson, go check it out. You’ll find it just after Chapter 49; I hope you like it! Thanks for reading, and for the review.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2019 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 50

Happy to provide ideas on giantess genre! I would mix viewpoints between the giantess and the tinies, but particularly focus on the perspective of the tinies. It's great when the giantess discusses how huge she is in comparison to the tinies and other things like buildings.  What she can do depends on how huge the giantess is...she could play with whole buildings between her toes or swim up and capture a cruise ship. I personally like larger giantess of at least 300 feet. If Shannon were 400 feet, Chris would look 1 inch tall...and she has seen him much smaller than that. I also personally like footplay, and there are plenty of things to play with at over 1000 feet. Overall I would recommend continuing the unique dynamic between Shannon and Chris. She can be cruel, but she can also be very playful. In each case, as a giantess,  she will cause a lot of inadvertent destruction.  Shannon is also very sure of herself and that cockiness will be a great attribute when hundreds of feet tall.  She, of all the characters,  has the personality to be an awesome giantess who would want to make a whole city her plaything. I see Chris growing back to normal and Shannon's secret exposed. With Chris' parents and police after her, the only way out is to grow gigantic to find Chris and make him her foot toy....nothing could stop her.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2019 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 50

Whoa! Now this is what I’m talking about! We actually have a person aware of Chris? And Chris actually grew, not once but twice?

It finally makes sense. The shrinking potion kept him shrunk for a while, but once it starts leaving his system, he starts growing fast. Personally, I would have preferred that Chris grew gradually so we can spend lots of time at each size, but I’m ok with this as long as we get someone to play with Chris at the fun sizes: 3 inches, 6 inches, maybe 1 ft or 2ft. Soon, Chris can actually be a viable toy for these ladies.

So Chris went from 1/8 inch to 1/4 inch and now I’m guessing 1/2 inch? It’s double each time, right? Or did he super grow this time to 1 inch or something? I think once Chris reaches 1 inch tall, the real fun begins.

So Sue Ann finds him. Funny how the only people who have seen Chris being tiny are the babysitters, the ones whose job is to take care of someone that is not dependent. And Chris needs all the help he can get.

Hmm. 1/4 inch is like ant size. I’m thinking ant man. Now 1/2 inch size is like the length of a single staple. Now thinking about it, how does Sue Ann even recognize a face that tiny. I mean, if the whole body is 1/2 inch tall, the head is like 1/8 inch tall. Maybe she guessed? I think Chris’s face is too small to be recognized.

So Rachel is in Chris’s home. Shannon left, but the big question is what about her boyfriend? I have to predict that she took him with her rather than keep him alone in the house. So Shannon has taken his car, his shrinking formula and also his little body all for herself. She controls his life, kinda erotic. Now let’s say he is in the house still. mean, imagine Rachel finds that guy? That would be awkward.

Maybe Rachel thinks the guy is Chris and takes him to her house. She goes to her room, ignores her mom and closes her door. She uses a magnifying glass, because kids would use something like that and then she sees that it’s not Chris. Rachel screams in fright, Mrs. Carson shows up and Rachel points at the tiny guy on her bed to which Mrs. Carson rushes over and grabs the little man who squirms in her grip. She tells Rachel that she will handle this and Mrs. Carson leaves the room with the little man in hand. Rachel meanwhile cries, wondering if the same fate happened to Chris. She cries herself to sleep, which lets Mrs. Carson be alone with the tiny man. She takes him to her bedroom, drops him on her bed in her master bedroom (aka the sex dungeon) and accuses him of being a pervert and spying on her daughter. The man explains his side, but Mrs. Carson isn’t having it. She thinks of a way to punish him, and remembers the erotic tale that she was just reading about before Rachel screamed. Mrs. Carson seductively says, “I know what you want” and he watches as Mrs. Carson lowers her right hand to the front of her yoga pants and begins caressing it. Almost immediately, a wet spot forms and is visible to the tiny man and Mrs. Carson could feel it. She closes her eyes and lets out a little moan. The tiny man sees Janet’s eyes close and decides its time to escape. He takes off as runs to the side of her bed, as fast as his little legs can carry him. After a few moans, Mrs. Carson opens her eyes and spots the tiny man attempting to escape. She takes her free hand and grabs the guy with one swift movement while her right hand is still rubbing her crotch. She looks down at him and says “I think it’s story time, what do you think?” and she giggles, not even waiting for a response. She heads into the living room and sits on her favorite chair, eager to continue reading her ongoing story. She picks up her book and reads aloud “and the giantess got turned on by the thought of keeping a tiny slave at her will, ready to use him for her pleasures for the rest of his days. The man screams in fright as the giantess kisses her tiny captive and drags him down her body, from her lips, through her cleavage, across her belly and stops at her pussy.” Mrs. Carson pauses and looks down at the tiny man in her hand who is shaking his head as fast as he can. Janet smiles in response, almost like a smirk knowing that she is role playing one of her fantasies. She puts the book down and takes the waistband of her panties and yoga pants, letting her musky fragrance spread and find the nose of the young man to give him a sample of her essence leaving him trembling in fear. She takes the struggling tiny man and lowers him into her panties and lets her clothing snap back into place securing the tiny man against her. Janet picks up the book and continues reading aloud so her new toy could listen. “She tells her slave that this is his new home now and he must bring her an orgasm or else she would kill him. The slave quickly began using his tiny arms to rub the giantess but she had another idea. Without saying a word, the giantess pressed the tiny’s body from the back and without any resistance, he slid right into her pussy, her vaginal lips closing the gap behind him.” Mrs. Carson, who was ready to follow the main character’s actions presses onto her own little man’s body and he too slid easily into her. Janet wanted to read more, but she was already living through her own story and her body felt it too. She never felt this way in so many years that she felt that she might have an orgasm right there on the spot. But then she composed herself. This wasn’t just about her having fun, but also to punish this man who was shrunken inside her daughter’s room. Mrs. Carson wanted this moment to last. A quick orgasm would be too easy of a punishment. No, instead she is going to keep him inside her pussy as long as she can. And when she is ready, Mrs. Carson will create the most powerful orgasm than she has ever experienced and give this man a true taste of her sexual nature.

I was going to type more about this chapter, but once again, I couldn’t resist and wrote another fan fiction.

Haha, I hope you enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter! (I also hope you change your mind and post before Labor Day.)

Author's Response: I’ll say this, TomSpeedy, you and the other readers sure do think up some creative scenarios. I can’t guarantee that they’ll all be used, but I guess in the alternate chapters, I can let loose and have a little fun 😅. I’m actively working on the “surprise”, and I’ve set a goal of Labor Day to have it all finished. However, if I get it done any sooner, I’ll post it as soon as I can.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2019 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 50

Great chapter...glad he is finally found! I also can't wait to see what Shannon is up to and how she's going to deal with Sue Ann, Rachel, and a growing Chris. Hope the next chapter comes soon!

Author's Response: There’s a lot happening: Chris is discovered, Rachel makes a risky move, Sue Ann learns the truth, and Shannon’s up to something... but I feel like we’re forgetting someone. Find out in a special chapter coming Labor Day!