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Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2019 12:28 PM Title: Alternate Chapter 49–What if Mrs. Carson had found Chris?

Wow this chapter turns Janet into an airhead, finding the missing neighbour son in a reduced condition makes an assumption and judges him for it without listening. Not even concidering the fact that she did not notice him all the while before in that chair so he had to be much smaller before, not concidering how he could have climbed on the chair if she was not able to notice him as she sat down on it the first time.

How he managed to enter the house. I only can hope you altered Janet for this chapter only to explain how poor chris (who you seem to hate really, thinking that everytime he has luck once, he gets bad luck twice as compensation) Suddenly got dominated, tortured and abused by a the person in this story i showed the most degree of responsibility so far.



Author's Response: Yes, this chapter does make some assumptions and take some artistic license with Mrs. Carson to facilitate the overall plot, but it’s all in fun.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2019 3:20 PM Title: Alternate Chapter 49–What if Mrs. Carson had found Chris?

Wow! I didn’t think it would be possible, but this is now my favorite chapter in all of giantess world! Now I have to change my reason for favoriting this story. It’s not just the consistent torment of giantesses on Chris, but now it’s this chapter. This is the chapter that will be remembered for years to come.

My previous favorite chapter held the top spot for over 2 years and now this chapter just topped it. It was phenomenal! I think it was worth the wait. I kinda forgot about this story, haha, so I didn’t worry about when you were going to post next. I remember faintly you said that this Labor Day weekend you will post, and look at you, posting at the beginning of it.

Where could I see a part 2? Haha! I would love to see Mrs. Carson do yoga with Chris inside her. But I’m glad you at least had Janet mention it, making Chris squirm in fear. Loved it!

It’s crazy because, I made the suggestion for this exactly 1 year ago! (Off by a few days, but basically a year.) This is well worth it since during this time, we had enough time to flesh out the characters, especially for Mrs. Carson.

Now I truly understand why you wanted me to pay attention to Mrs. Carson for the past 2 chapters. I never even thought about Chris actually being under her that time those past chapter, now this chapter felt like a behind the scenes moment. Like “hey, do you remember those Mrs Carson scenes? Well, Chris was actually being used for her pleasure here.” You were planning this for a while now, weren’t you? Haha! Thank you.

Also, we can’t forget about the length of this chapter! It was basically more than double what you usually write! I even had to take breaks during the chapter since I was already working up a sweat reading this, haha. I felt just like Mrs. Carson, getting turned on by such an erotic tale. I mean, I’m reading and it’s super sexy. Then 15 minutes later, I’m reading another sexy scene! It was a never-ending thrill ride, and I’m glad I am able to read it now despite waiting for all those months, haha. But it’s all worth it once it’s here.

After all these chapters without Chris growing much, it felt weird to see him grow so fast. I mean, he was already about 9 inches long by the time Janet went to her master bedroom. That reminds me, Chris is 9 inches tall and Mrs. Carson’s pussy still swallowed him up whole. Either she has a monster pussy, or her vagina is super tight right now with Chris wedged up in there. That’s just extremely sexy. Not to mention the fact that he is still growing so he might actually fill her up like her giant 12 inch dildo.

Also, you used the dialogue perfectly in this chapter! The way Mrs. Carson went from shocked to horny was nice! And the last few paragraphs when she talked to him while he was inside her was super erotic! I loved how she mentioned that she will keep him in her room to keep him safe and also that she will take “good care of him” and lastly mentioning how he may feel while she does yoga with him inside her.

Wow, I’m so jealous of Chris right now. I know this is an alternate chapter, but if this is the spark to another story, it would be great to see Mrs. Carson have her way with a tiny as her own pleasure pet. It could easily be a story on its own. Who knows, maybe Shannon accidentally shrinks a local neighbor called “Tom” and Tom somehow winds up in Mrs. Carson’s house. Hehe.

Thank you for this gift of an amazing chapter! I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it; I just took your idea and ran with it. I liked the whole erotic novel aspect along with the giantess orgasm with Chris under her, so that’s what I focused on. I knew it was going to be a big chapter, and I had to have everything flow smoothly with lots of details, but I still wasn’t expecting it to be as long as it was. I know it might be weird to see Chris growing so fast, but there is a reason. I won’t spoil it, but it’s very subtle; Check out the times that Chris grows in this alternate chapter, and then read the last chapter of the main story to see how and when Chris grows. That should give you a clue as to the triggers. Thanks for all your suggestions!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2019 1:51 PM Title: Alternate Chapter 49–What if Mrs. Carson had found Chris?

It's always good to see an update from you. One, because your story is amazing. Two, because I love to do reviews on stories and characters I like.

I am not gonna lie. I was hoping for a main story chapter, BUT, this extra staring miss Carlson is very good and got me thinking: man, Chris has a harem of giantess kkkkkkkkkkkk. Rachel, miss Carlson, Shannon and Sue Ann kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.

Tell me, do you have a favorite character? If yes, is it miss Carlson? For me I think you already know, as I love shipping Rachel and Chris XDD

As for the future, I love your long chapters, but, if it would mean you could update more frequently, I wouldn't mind shorter chapters. Curiosity is killing me... crossing my fingers to see some aware interaction betwen a giga Rachel and Chris kkkk (maybe the growth formula has some side effect on the users mind, like magnifing repressed wishes and emotions together with the size... yep there goes my imagination again).

As always, thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please, keep up the good work :)

 



Author's Response: I’m always happy to see everyone’s reviews; makes all the hard work worth it. I’m not sure I have a favorite character, but it’s probably between Rachel and Sue Ann. I know my chapters tend to be long, but I have so many details to fit in, especially during the interactions between tinies and the giantesses, that it’s hard to write short chapters while still keeping the good parts (this is erotica after all). I think I can certainly fit a little interaction between a playful Rachel and small Chris in the next chapter, so keep an eye out.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2019 9:22 AM Title: Alternate Chapter 49–What if Mrs. Carson had found Chris?

Really enjoyed the alternate chapter, but I'm really looking forward to the continuation of the main story to see what Shannon is up to! Any thoughts on when that will be posted? Great work!



Author's Response: Right now, I have the outline done, but the details and particulars aren’t hashed out yet. I know what needs to happen, but I also have to make things entertaining and erotic for the readers. I plan to have at least one more chapter, hopefully to, finished by the end of September, with an overall goal of having the ENTIRE story finished by the end of the year. I’m also planning one more alternate chapter with Shannon as a giantess before I’m through.

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