Date: September 13 2019 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 51
I read some comments and realized I forgot an important piece of information: Shannon wants Chris to be tiny forever. I was foccusing on the growth possibility, but this is also very interesting now that Rachel is aware of Chris situation.
As I said, Rachel will never do something to hurt Chris BUT she might enjoy having him tiny. That way he can always be with her. As we can see a love triangle or square taking form, Shannon might take advantage of Rachel desire and innocence to get to Chris.
Just an addition I wanted to do to my last review after reading the most recent comments and responses. If Chris get stuck tiny forever, I hope he stays an inch or half an inch tall. This way the giantess stay very big but he isn't microscopic.
Again, thanks for the story and also for always replying to the comments.
Author's Response: Well, I think you’ll enjoy where the story heads from here, and you may be surprised by how it ends.
[Report This]Date: September 13 2019 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 51
Hmm. Sue Ann and Rachel are aware of the tiny Chris.
Personally, I think it’s too soon to let Rachel see Chris. Sue Ann just noticed Chris at the beginning of this chapter and it would’ve been nice that she gets some alone time with Chris while everyone doesn’t know his situation.
I agree with Chris, that she didn’t have to answer the phone while Chris was hanging onto her nipple. Maybe, she is just used to answering phone calls. She prioritized a phone call over helping Chris. Lol.
I love how you had Rachel react to Chris before and after meeting him. The way she was super eager to see Chris, unaware of his condition shows that she is ready to see him no matter what. I love how you had her show up at the door unannounced. Her character is the rebellious teen and she disobeys all the adults in this story.
Sue Ann could’ve also used a video to send it to Rachel so Rachel could calm down. Is FaceTime in this universe? Clearly Rachel got what she wanted by manipulating Sue Ann to let her see Chris.
If it was this easy for Sue Ann to slip up, imagine Rachel, whose mother can easily tell when she is upset or excited. You already know Mrs. Carson is going to see the look on Rachel’s face and see what’s up.
So, did Rachel just walk all the way to Sue Ann’s house? Did she ask her mom for permission? I’m also guessing Sue Ann’s Place isn’t that far since Rachel just showed up there and she is too young to drive. It’s interesting because earlier Sue Ann said she was too far to spy on Shannon and that’s why she asked Rachel to help. So, I think we need clarification on the location of Sue Ann’s house to Shannon’s.
After reading numerous chapters of unaware, it almost seems off to have not just one, but 2 giantesses be aware of Chris. Something is abound to happen. Maybe Rachel gets overprotective and Sue Ann finds it dangerous. Also, with 2 giantesses, means Chris is twice as likely to have some “accidents” going on with either of them. But either way, now you can try all the aware stuff that you have been waiting to write about.
Sue Ann could bake a cake. She puts Chris on top of it when it’s finished and Chris starts eating. Then Rachel walks in the kitchen and takes a piece of cake with Chris on it. Sue Ann turns toward Rachel to say hi, and noticed Chris is missing from the cake and connects the dots. Rachel is about to eat Chris when Sue Ann stops her. I could see some playful ideas show up.
It’s hard to imagine something sexual when both ladies are there. One has to be separated. I think Rachel has to leave so her mother doesn’t wonder why she is gone for so long. Then Sue Ann could have her fun. After all Chris wants to be alone with Sue Ann. While, he likes Rachel, I’m sure he wants to be with the woman who he fell in love with.
Well, this chapter is very different from the rest since we are moving from unaware to aware. I like aware so this is a great change of pace. Very unexpected though so I appreciate the surprise. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
(Also, congrats on 150 reviews!)
Author's Response: To begin, I’d been debating for a long time whether I not wanted Rachel to know about Chris. I ultimately decided for her to find out because I wanted their relationship to grow an evolve. I also wanted her reactions to seeing him small to seem realistic, and for her quirks to come out moving forward.
If you recall, Rachel walked to a park earlier in the story. Not long after, Sue Ann walked up. I mentioned that Sue lived nearby and would occasionally do work in the park to enjoy nice days, so it’s not inconceivable for Rachel to be able to walk to Sue Ann’s place, as they both know each other.
To be honest, I kind of thought up the whole “phone incident” on the fly. I needed to have some kind of sexy interaction between the two of them in this chapter; I felt it fit well.
Now, moving forward, keep in mind that Chris has feelings for both girls, and each one cares about him in different ways. There might be some playful aspects, but he’s still a teenager, so is Rachel, and although hormones might be raging, they’r still young and innocent. Don’t worry, though, Chris will have his moments with both girls.
I really hope you like where the story is heading; I’m also pleased that you posted review 150!
Date: September 13 2019 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 51
Thank you for the quick update. I love gentle giantess and this last chapter was perfect in all ways possible, not only highlighting Sue Ann relation with Chris, but also Chris reserves in revealing himself to Rachel. Let me elaborate.
Until now Chris had been desperate to get help doesn't matter from whom. But now that he got Sue Ann, he was reluctant to reveal himself to Rachel and even stated he prefered to be found by Sue Ann. I can think of a couple of reasons for that. Up until now we have yet to see direct interaction between the giantess and Chris, aside from Shannon, now we will be able to see Chris dynamic with other characters.
It's preety obvious that Rachel loves Chris deeply, and Chris also has feelings for her, that being the first reason he didn't wanted to be seeing by her (he is embarassed). BUT, although I don't think she would ever do anything to hurt him on porpuse, Chris knows how mischievous Rachel really is, he knows her true self and knows she will want to have fun with him once he is found out.
I would emphasize the mischievous part. He is the most important person for her besides her family, and now she can have him in the palm of her hand (or the sole of her foot kkkkkkk), maybe that will get to her head and Chris knows it. Maybe she will even get jealous of Chris preference for Sue Ann.
Then there is Sue Ann, who I was surprised to say "the feeling’s mutual" and even blush. As I said, Chris built quite the giantess harem for him kkkkkkk. There are many ways the story can go now. The way I see it, we will have some character development as Sue Ann and Rachel are now alone with a inch tall Chris.
Another idea (fell free to use it): Sue Ann has to leave Chris and Rachel alone for whatever reason. Rachel takes this chance to have some fun with Chris, that doesn't like much as he still traumatized from the recent events, but what can he do against her? He eventually cries and shouts he prefers Sue Ann to take care of him triggering Rachel jealousy.
At this moment, knowing Sue Ann was out and thinking no one is home, Shannon breaks into the place with many formulas in hand (as she knows the effects must be wearing off). She is startled by Rachel and ends up spilling all the mixed formulas at Rachel and Chris, creating a growth formula by accident. Chris is back to normal, but his jealous friend is now more than a 100 meters tall and growing... and she is out to play with Chris and squish Shannon and Sue Ann.
As I said, just another idea. I know it's nearly impossible for things to happen as I described, but I hope it helps in the creative process. Can't wait for the next chapter! As always, thank you for all the effort and care put into writing this story. You are amazing!
Author's Response: First off, thank you for being such an avid reader. I always enjoy reading and responding to all my reviews.
Chris, indeed, is apprehensive and embarrassed about Rachel seeing him in his current state. He cares and has feelings for her, but he knows her teasing and playful nature all too well. We’ll just have to wait and see how she reacts. I CAN say that there will certainly be some character development with Sue Ann AND Rachel in the next chapter, but that’s all I’ll say for now.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2019 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 51
Yeeeeeessssss I’ve been waiting like a year and a half for Sue Ann to find Chris
Author's Response: Yes, a lot of readers have been waiting for this. I knew Sue Ann was always going to find him, but I couldn’t decide how it would actually come to fruition. I ultimately decided on having Chris end up in her house to leave the door open for some gentle encounters, so I certainly hope you enjoy the next chapters with Sue Ann.