[Report This]Date: October 03 2019 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 52
Whoops, forgot to give a review after reading it the other day.
I agree, this was a long chapter. You won’t hear me say this often, but I found the Shannon bit to be the most interesting part of this chapter. Loved the way she kept Ray in her ass the whole time.
Even the dialogue this chapter was spot on. I couldn’t help but get excited about Shannon foreseeing the future and imagining taking care of Ray while he takes care of her needs. The way she worded it made it more amazing.
If she going to let the salesman fuck her in the ass with Ray inside her butt? That’s fucked up but hot at the same time. She is the only giantess in this story to actually have a scene like this.
Then the bulk of this chapter was dedicated to Sue and Rachel, but mostly Rachel. She tried to remain calm, but kept worrying about every little detail. I thought she was going to faint multiple times this chapter, I mean relax girl. What happened in the past is in the past. I don’t know how Sue Ann and Chris dealt with her. She almost reached the annoying category when she reacted to Chris started sharing his memories with her.
Then at the end we have some Rachel foot play which I know someone was looking forward to this. I had to smile because I knew it was going to happen soon once Rachel was aware of Chris.
However, at the very end Chris is growing again. Now I think he might be growing too fast, haha! Remember when I would complain that you were keeping Chris too small for too long? (It was a long time, to be honest.) Well, now I keep forgetting how big he is and I think I lost track. Is he 1 foot tall now? Or is he the popular 6 inch dildo size?
Also, will Chris have more adventures with Mrs. Carson, or Noreen again? If not, that’s ok, there is at least Sue Ann so hopefully they can have some fun together.
Anyway, glad to see another chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Yes, I was actually wondering if you were going to write a review or not.
I had actually debated whether or not to include the Shannon update in this chapter, or wait until later. I figured since readers were curious as to what she’s been up to the whole time, it was best to check back in with her. I wanted something sexy to happen as I was wondering if the rest of the chapter would have anything juicy, so I figured Ray stuck in her ass would suffice.
Now, if you recall, Shannon told the salesman “only through the front door”, it was meant as an innuendo for “NO butt sex”; Of course, she WAS still planning on leaving Ray stuck in her ass while she screwed the sales guy, so...
I knew the bulk of this chapter would be dialogue driven, exploring Rachel finding out about Chris, coming to terms with his situation, and developing their relationship, I just didn’t realize how long it was going to be. I really needed the transitions and emotions to feel natural and not forced. Remember, Rachel’s not only been worried about Chris, but she finds out that he’s actually been shrunk, something up until now she thought impossible, so it’d definitely be a shock! You must also remember that “he hadn’t told her about the pool incident”— I apparently left out that he hadn’t told Rachel everything—so he’s left out some important details in his story. And although Rachel develops real feelings for him, I wanted her to interact with Chris and show her playful, teasing side.
As far as Chris’s current size, he’s still only 1/2 an inch tall, until he grows at the end of the chapter. How big will he be now? You’ll just have to wait and see.
As far as Mrs. Carson and Noreen...well, once again, you’ll just have to wait and see.
Date: October 02 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 52
Are you planning on doing any more alternate chapters before the end of the main story, or at this point do you want to finish the main story before you do alternates? Also is the giantess Shannon storyline in the main story or an alternate? Still looking forward to seeing what she's up to...and I can't wait to see the look on Chris' face when he sees her again.!
Author's Response: So, I’m planning one more alternate chapter before the story ends, but I’m still trying to set it up. Unfortunately, I can’t really talk about the Giantess Shannon storyline without spoiling the rest of the story. Everything will come in due time, however, so all I can ask is to please be patient.
Now, if you refer to the beginning of the latest chapter, you’ll recall that Shannon is out and about making preparations to leave the country (with a tiny scientist stuck in her ass). She’s still got a lot to do, though.... and she’s still actively trying to find Chris.
Date: October 01 2019 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 52
I just saw this is categorized as a completed story. It's a mistake isn't it?? Or are you working on a part 2??
Author's Response: I just saw it. Yes, that was a mistake. I’ve fixed it. Thank you.
Date: September 30 2019 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 52
Chris and Rachel fun time fells lighthearted and natural as it should be. Overall, a great interaction chapter. Both are starting to admit there feelings and Rachel seems honnestly elated to find out Chris likes her feet. I can only pray that someday I will write scenes as good as you do.
I would say the only sad thing is that Chris is growing again, but it's obvious things aren't going to be that simple for him, especially now that Rachel and Sue Ann are finally taking a more central role in the story.
Thank you for the chapter! Can't wait to see how Chris and Rachel will end up when the story reaches the climax XDD
Author's Response: I knew that I wanted Chris and Rachel’s relationship to blossom in this chapter, and for everyone to see her innocence, but I also wanted to add a little playful interaction between Rachel and Chris, just to emphasize that the ENTIRE dynamic between them hasn’t completely changed: Rachel’s happy-go-lucky, tomboyish nature still comes through, which means that she’d still tease him about the whole ordeal.
It’s true that Chris is growing again, but it won’t be much. There’s still a lot I want to happen before...Oops, can’t spoil the ending. Let’s just say I’m not done with him yet.