[Report This]Date: October 17 2019 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 53
A lot of things happened this chapter, but I'm glad we got more fun size interactions with Sue Ann. Based on your last review response, I think you're doing an excellent job with the role you want for her, where she isn't intentionally stimulating Chris or is even aware of it, but intentions still don't exactly matter in the end.
Personally, I would have enjoyed it if she let him do something a tad more risky, like sleeping near/on her feet. But from how Sue Ann is personality wise, it wouldn't have really felt in character. But I think doing a alternate chapter (or set of chapters) where Sue Ann allows Chris to live out his fantasies with her would be quite enjoyable to read. I'm not sure what your plan is yet for the next alternate chapter, bit I think a Sue Ann focus would be a great idea.
But I think you did a great job with the relationship between Rachel and Chris, and I could see her wanting him to shrink more frequently in their real life too.
And I'm probably still in the minority where I do not like Shannon, but I guess that means you wrote a good antagonist. So I hope Chris is just having a nightmare with the ending of the chapter.
If you have no interest in exploring any alternate stuff with Sue Ann and Chris, then I'd be willing to write and give it a shot. If you don't mind and don't already have plans for it.
Looking forward to the next chapter and what ever alternate stuff you have planned next!
Author's Response: I know people want an interaction between Sue Ann and Chris, but it’s very out of character for her. I did, however, want to flesh out a playful interaction between Rachel and Chris to demonstrate her playful, teasing nature towards Chris’s condition and also evolve their relationship. There’s only a few chapters left, so keep checking back.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2019 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 53
Glad you mentioned his actually height now. Makes the interactions with the giantesses much more imaginable.
A one-inch Chris is much easier to spot, and more fun to play with. I can’t wait for the the new games that these ladies could do with Chris.
I’m starting to see the roles of Rachel and Sue Ann now. Rachel is quickly getting comfortable with Chris being small. She went from super cautious to physical playing with him like how Shannon did. Except this time Chris enjoys it since it’s Rachel and not Shannon.
Sue Ann is playing the gentle motherly role while the “kids” are playing with each other. I like the bath scene where Sue Ann had to massage Chris. Of course Chris gets turned on while Sue Ann just saw it as a task to clean him. Haha. Maybe this will be a daily thing.
I’m a little disappointed on how Sue Ann responded to Chris being into her. I like how she mentions the age gap, but she didn’t have to mention the whole Rachel thing. Because then that sounds like Sue Ann isn’t interested in her. I always had the impression that Sue had one of those thoughts that Chris was a handsome young teen and while it would be weird when Chris is normal, being tiny kinda bends the rules a little bit. I was thinking maybe since Chris is tiny, Sue Ann could grant him his wish and do some sexy stuff with Chris. The foot rub was a smart way to start if off. I thought Chris could have kept doing that stuff before sharing his feelings.
The dream with 3inch Chris massaging Sue Ann and Rachel seemed real to me at first. I was thinking “wow, I guess we continue when Rachel came back from her house”. I thought it was real until both ladies took off their bras. That’s when I thought “ok, there’s no way that actually happened” and I was right. Chris just became horny as usual.
Then Chris wakes up to realize he is still 1 inch tall with Sue Ann. Even though he knows Sue Ann isn’t interested in her, that doesn’t mean that he can’t have any sexual interactions with her. Chris could easily climb out of his bed, travel to her bed, and meander down her body and play with her legs and work his way up. Soon, Sue Ann will get turned on and maybe give Chris the ride of a lifetime. I don’t think Chris would mind dying that way. It would be a sexy way to leave his world. It would be funny if he was stuck inside her and then he grew to 3 inches and Sue thinks some expanding/inflatable dildo is inside her. That would be a crazy example, but Chris has options to have some fun with Sue Ann.
The ending part with Shannon. I don’t think it’s real. We had a sexy wet dream earlier so it would make sense to balance that with a nightmare. Shannon showing up out of nowhere seems unlikely. I’m aware Shannon has that tracker to find where Chris is, but I don’t think it would have happened so soon. Lastly, we are just about to have some one on one time with Sue Ann. Shannon seems to always out babysit Chris.
Well, what a crazy chapter. I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response: To start, check out my responses to the other reviews of this chapter; I actually touch on a lot of your points and explain the characters in detail. In a nutshell, Sue Ann takes on the role of the responsible caregiver. She’s not trying to sexually frustrate Chris with her actions, but she represents the type of woman who has that sweet personality, yet is slightly oblivious to the effects she has on others. Both Sue Ann and Rachel will play vital roles at the end of the story, but that’s all I’ll say for now.
The dream with Rachel and Sue Ann was really me catering to the erotic needs of the story while still keeping the main storyline moving. I just wanted to make sure I had enough “good stuff”.
I’ll admit, your suggestion about a sexy interaction between Sue Ann and Chris is....intriguing. I’ll certainly keep it in mind.
Crazy chapter?! It’s been a crazy story, and the ending has something you may not expect, so stay tuned.
Date: October 16 2019 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 53
Very excited to see Shannon back! But how did she get past Sue Ann? Unless he's dreaming... can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: You’ll find out exactly what Shannon’s been up to in the next chapter. It’s also going to help set up the last alternate chapter.
Date: October 16 2019 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 53
I sense a lot of foreshadowing in this chapter. And you did a great job showcasing how prompt Rachel is to swing moods in these last two chapters. First she is worried and sad for what happened to Chris, than she is playful and happy but also clueless about how dangerous she can be to him and also gets angry if someone calls her out. Question: what would have happened if an authority figure (Sue Ann) wasn't around? I think she would eventually get carried away and hurt Chris unnintentionaly. Can't wait to see more of this love story XDD
Speaking of Sue Ann, I must say I wasn't all that invested in her character, but you made it impossible not to like her. She is the only character so far to take care of Chris without asking or getting anything in exchange. She just want to help someone she trully cares about. It's just sweet. And the fact she does not display any sexual desire towards Chris is very good for his own development in the story, because he has to step up, take the lead and open up to her.
You have handled the story extremely well so far. And what a cliffhanger!! Now I am gonna update daily waiting for the next chapter! Hope you are happy!! XDD
But, seriously, It seems we have entered the final arc of Chris, Shannon, Rachel and Sue Ann tale. Thank you. I can't wait to see the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I really wanted to explore Rachel’s character and how she reacts to Chris’s situation in these past two chapters, along with how her and Chris’s feelings for one another have evolved. Even though I wanted her feelings towards Chris to grow, I still wanted her character to act realistically, kind of how I view her overall character as a close best friend would: somewhat teasingly and playfully. But through it all, she cares about Chris and wouldn’t willfully hurt him, at least not on purpose anyway. I actually like the playful giantess interactions, and wanted Rachel to play the playful-yet-loving giantess, as opposed to Shannon’s playful dominance.
I knew I wanted Sue Ann to come into the story in the second act, and wanted her character to be the responsible caring adult. I was trying to endear her to the readers so that you all get a sense of why Chris likes her so much, and why he’s so broken-hearted when she clarifies her feelings, while leaving just a glimmer of hope: “Maybe in the future...”
It’s true that things are starting to wrap up, but there’s still lots of good parts and conflict resolution left, so check back at the end of the month.