[Report This]Date: November 12 2019 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 54
Now that I learned how to rate, just passing by to give your story the 5 stars it deserves ;)
Author's Response: Well, thank you. Check back on Friday for a new chapter.
Date: November 01 2019 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 54
Just a quick addition to my last comment: Shannon is walking around full of chemicals and something is bound to happen. Maybe she will accidentally shrink down herself while having Chris on her body (or protagonist will end up in micro-verse allright XDD) or someone will end up growing… just some ideas. Oh I can’t wait to see!
Author's Response: Oh, something is definitely bound to happen, and I’m excited for you to see!
Date: November 01 2019 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 54
I find Shannon to be a most intriguing character. She is clearly evil, manipulative, a maniac even. But she also has moments where she genuinely seems to care for Chris and truly want and fantasize with him loving her. This chapter is one of these chapters that highlight her obsession, and it got me curious about what would be her reaction if Chris actually kicked the bucket or got really hurt or in trouble.
So Sue Ann is knocked out for the time being. Therefore, the only other options to save Chris are Rachel and her mother… interesting. Let’s see how things play out. I really thought Chris would go micro again in this chapter kkkkkkkkkk
I fell you are updating faster and I thank you for your hard work. I am Dying to see how you will wrap up this story.
Please, keep up the awesome work! See you next time :)
Author's Response: I picture Shannon as the girl that you’d love to be with: attractive, well-built, a little chunky—and would probably fall for, if she weren’t such a bitch! She knows what she wants and is willing to use her body to get it. Basically, someone you’d love to hate.
Suanne is incapacitated, but you’re right: they’re still Rachel, Janet Carson, and also Noreen, so there’s still hope.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2019 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 54
These Shannon chapters are getting better. At the beginning of this story, I hated her, but she actually makes herself quite an interesting villain. Of course, if she was hot, it would cause me to have difficulty choosing whether to root for Shannon or the good guys which is everyone else.
I like how Shannon is basically using her body to have her way with all the men she meets in this chapter. Whether it’s sex or flashing some guy, she gets more perks to help her move out of the country.
This new super absorbent pouch panty seems interesting. I like how Ray is sewn inside the actual panties. He can’t even see anything. He is just a Maxi pad basically, ready to absorb and smell her juices.
One thing I don’t think is clever is Shannon’s plan to frame Sue Ann. It seems very silly. Putting Chris’s clothes in her room? She put a “trail” that leads to her house? What trail? Chris’s favorite snack crumbs? Lol. It wasn’t specified. Also, when she told the landlord woman that Sue Ann was stalking her, I facepalmed. Why would Sue Ann stalk Shannon if Sue Ann kidnapped Chris? Wouldn’t Sue Ann be avoiding Shannon instead?
The fact that Shannon disappeared and Chris is missing will connect both of them together since Chris’s parents left Shannon in charge. So the police would look into Chris’s house. Then they would probably ask neighbors and such so Rachel and Mrs. Carson would help frame Shannon. No one else knows about Chris besides them and Sue Ann.
Is Sue Ann dead, or just paralyzed? Does the effect wear off? Also, if Sue Ann can get back up, she will look for Chris inside the closet and find the clothes of Chris in there, and deal with it appropriately. So Shannon’s trap won’t work if Sue Ann could just remove it.
With the info given, Shannon’s “clever” plan doesn’t seem so clever at all... unless I’m missing something.
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: First, I want to address the elephant in the room: Shannon’s plan. You’re not missing anything; Shannon’s plan isn’t “clever” at all, and that’s the whole point. She’s not thinking clearly she’s making it up as she goes, basically fumbling through things. She’s so blinded by her ambition and her love for Chris that she can’t see the mistakes she’s making, and when you see how everything ends you’ll understand.
I really wanted to explore Shannon using her body to get her way in this chapter. It explores her manipulative nature. I wasn’t sure how much Giantess/tiny man interactions would be in this chapter, so I added the bed scene with Shannon and the salesman. I’d actually think it’d be funny for Shannon to have sex while a tiny man was trapped inside her. Plus, I’m a fan of a woman who likes to tease her man in bed.
Now, just to settle your mind, Sue Ann is just fine, only knocked out for a while. I did extensive research on which drug could get the job done without doing any kind of permanent damage, so relax. Sue Ann is crucial for the ending of the story, as are Rachel, Noreen, and Janet Carson.