Date: November 26 2019 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 56
I can imagine of a alternative ending before chapter 56, where Shannon already got everything done with her luggage and it's already in her way to the airport and in between that time Chris try to escape again and that end up resulting in Shannon keeping Chris inside her panties now, while Sue Ann arrieve in Chris house Shannon is already in the airport waiting to enter her plane and when Sue Ann realise the Shannon is no longer in the house it's to late, the plane already takes off and Shannon sucess in her escape, and something extra that can happens ( junst in my own thoughts), while in the plane Chris end up stimulating Shannon's pussy and that's makes Shannon instinctively play around with Chris from outside her pants and ending up making him get shoved inside her pussy, and Shannon notice that the passenger that was sitting next to her (a really well looking man) notice her stimulating herself from outside her pants, he smiles and invite her to the plane bathroom, Shannon notice the outline of his hard boner on his pants while he takes off to the bathroom to wait for her, she thinks "why not" just because she got Chris already, it didn't mean she wouldn't enjoy some normal sized mans too, and with Chris inside her it would be extra pleasure and would also make Chris learn to behave more and accepts this is his life now and he'll have to learn to like it, beginning now, Shannon enter the bathroom the man is with his pants down and with a hard boner waiting for her she lower her pants and panties together, the man insert his dick in her moisty and wet pussy and both start to fuck in silence to not bring any attention from the outside passangers, the man unawared that a little person is inside that vagina while he vigorously fucks her, in the mean time Chris is enduring the whole situation of being shoved inner Shannon's vagina by this gigantic unaware dick until finally the unaware and unknow man and Shannon cames leaving Chris just a little space to breath while he swims in there, after that the man take off his dick from inside her and Shannon had to hold her pussy closed so Chris can no slide off her, they both clean up and dress up and the man exit first while Shannon waits just a little longer to exit too, she still can feel Chris inside her and that's good, she goes back to her sit.
(But anyway this is only my thoughts of for the extra "Bad ending" to makes Chris have no rights anymore then being only a sex toy to Shannon and she could do anything that she wanted with him and he would have to obey)
But I can't wait to see the next chapter of the story (probably the conclusion) and I also can't wait for a alternative "bad ending" where Shannon escapes with Chris.
Author's Response: It’d be a pretty unhappy ending for Chris, that’s for sure, but sometimes it pays to be bad.
Date: November 26 2019 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 56
Nice. I hope Sue Ann is bigger then Shannon after shrinking ends, but chris shrinks more as well, i also hope rachel finds them and gets Sue Ann and Chris to safety.
Author's Response: Well, they all got dosed, so anything is possible. Stay tuned!
Date: November 26 2019 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 56
I just have a feeling that Rachel is not going to call the cops but instead just show up to help. She is headstrong but has a good heart. Fortunately when she arrives she won't be in any danger as the sole giantess. I can't wait to see Shannon get some comeuppance, and I really can't wait to see the view micro Chris has of her! I hope he gets to explore her landscape sized sole. I bet those wrinkles look like mountains now.
I also am looking forward to the weekly posts and the alternate ending with a likely giantess Shannon scenario. Hopefully it will be more than 1 chapter? There's a lot of fun to be had with a giantess Shannon scenario...particularly with her goddess complex and a whole city of little toys!
Author's Response: Well, Rachel has been pretty impulsive and has let her emotions get the better of her lately, so she may not be able to help herself. As for Shannon, she’s been taking some undue risks, and unknowingly squishing Ray might just come back to haunt her.
Most likely, the alternate chapter will only be a one-off, but it’ll be as long as it needs to be to properly tell the story. Remember how long the chapter with Janet Carson was?
[Report This]Date: November 25 2019 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 56
Well, well, well... Shannon tasting of her own venom. She maybe smaller than Sue Ann, but who am I kidding? We just care that Chris is back to micro size! :DD And with Ray out of the picture, no one can ever bring him back to normal.
I could never imagine this story ending anywhere else other than Chris house. The story started there and it’s the place everything will end. As for the fighting sequence, I love how clever you are with your characters. Sue Ann believing to be leading Shannon into a trap, Shannon fooling her rival and you using this opportunity to get both barefoot and our hero on the floor ;)
And we have one dead tiny. I am not surprised. Since the beginning Ray seemed disposable to me, just an instrument to get the story to the next phase. He died by the foot of the woman he loved. Pretty poetic for such a pathetic dude.
I think the showdown will continue between Norem (who will take her friend side under the condition of having access to the shrinking formula) vs. Mrs. Carlson (who will take Sue Ann side). Rachel, being the rebel she is, disobey Sue Ann instructions and hurry to the scene just to find everyone has ended up shrunk, even her mother. But, more importantly, Chris is nowhere to be found. With all the chaos, the boy was forgotten… Sue Ann remembers seeing Chris on Shannon face before she shrunk….. oh no….. Everyone rise their feet and check the sole… there is a little red stain on Shannon and Sue Ann soles… Yeah, I love imagining a devastated Sue Ann and an enraged Rachel without anyone to stop her.
Wait, scratch all that. I just realized Sue Ann will be naked on the next chapter! God! It’s half of the dream of chapter 53 coming true. Sue Ann is now a naked giantess from Chris perspective! Something tells me Rachel will not be happy and will crush the competition kkkkkkkkk
Need…to know… what… will happen next! Also, can’t thank you enough for the quick updates. Don’t know why, but I feel you are going to drop the last chapter on December 25 and be like “merry Christmas everyone” huehuehue
Author's Response: I’ve known that there would be an eventual showdown between Shannon and Sue Ann for some time now, and I also knew the confrontation would happen at Chris’s house just before Shannon leaves, I just hadn’t worked out all the details up until now. I ultimately decided on having BOTH Shannon and Sue Ann shrinking when Shannon tries to shrink her, and I’d wrestled with the idea of a “micro Chris” as well.
I obviously needed to have some kind of giantess interaction (this is a fetish’s story after all) and I figured Chris dodging two sets of bare feet while the giant women fought overhead would be perfect here, I just needed to get them barefoot first.
It’s true that Ray is a means to an end, and that his death is somewhat poetic, and quite ironic; in actuality, his character served several purposes: I wanted a somewhat believable origin for the shrinking potion—it’s not something that just comes in the mail. I also wanted to show how Shannon uses the men around her. Then, I knew that I wanted him to end up squished, and that I wanted Shannon to be the one to do it; it demonstrates the realistic dangers of someone being shrunk. Ray’s death also sets up how the story ultimately ends, but that’s all I’ll say for now.
While I AM planning on a chapter for Christmas, I’m hoping to finish the story before then.🤞Actually, I’ve been a a writing spree as of late, probably since I’m so close to the end, so expect the next chapters to be posted about every week or so.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2019 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 56
The fight is at Chris’s house?! In the last chapter, Shannon says “it’s time to go little guys” and then next we see a paragraph of Rachel and Sue Ann thinking of how they can find Chris and then Sue Ann decides to leave her house to check Chris’s house. And then in this chapter, Shannon still hasn’t left yet??? I thought she would be at least on the road.
I guess it’s more realistic to have the fight at the house instead of the airport so that way, there would be no police or spectators. But I could’ve sworn that Shannon already left by the time Sue Ann arrived.
Spoiler: (for those who didn’t read the chapter yet.) I’m curious why you made Ray die like that? Wouldn’t it be awesome for him to be kept as a permanent sex toy or something? Personally, I think it would be a better ending for him.
So Chris was able to super jump from a stair and land on Shannon’s eye?! Haha. Kinda ridiculous but also awesome.
I think the biggest surprise is that Sue Ann and Shannon are shrinking too. I have no idea what size they will be but I assume Shannon will be smaller than Sue Ann since I think Shannon got most of it in her mouth.
Also, what’s with all the slaps. Where are the punches? I’m pretty sure they are trying to kill each other.
My favorite part was when Shannon tried to convince Sue Ann on joining her and having a tiny for her own pleasure. The way Sue Ann hesitated in her response made me excited. She actually considered it for a second. If the villain was a guy, I could easily see Sue Ann shrinking him and ending keeping him as a toy. So, I’m glad Sue Ann is somewhat open to the idea of being a giantess.
Well I can’t wait for part 2!
Author's Response: To begin, I wanted the fight to happen as Chris’s house: it’s a more intimate setting and helps set up the ultimate ending to the story. At the point Shannon said, “Let’s go”, she still had to finish packing the car, and while she was off getting ready, Rachel has roused Sue Ann. Several events actually overlap timing-wise; sorry if that wasn’t clear.
I had planned on Ray’s death from the outset, and I also knew I wanted Shannon to have done it. It would be interesting to see him kept as a permanent sex toy, and letting the other characters THINK he was dead, but his death actually serves an important purpose to the end of the story....though maybe in an alternate chapter...🤔
I had toyed around with BOTH Shannon and Sue Ann shrinking for a bit, along with Chris shrinking to micro size, the issue was exactly how to make it happen. At the same time, I also wanted for Chris to discover he’s not as helpless as he initially thought. In actuality, this scene facilitates several plot points: When he sees Shannon about to shrink Sue Ann, Chris is snapped out of his helplessness, and unleashes all of his pent up anger towards Shannon. Him thrusting himself heroically towards her causes Shannon to spill the potion on herself, Chris, AND Sue Ann.
As for the overall fight scene, girls are more prone to slapping each other, but I wanted to show them throwing a few punches as well, like Sue Ann nailing Shannon in the nose, and Shannon slamming Sue’s face into the bannister and the floor.
I REALLY liked your suggestion about Shannon trying to entice Sue Ann with a shrunken man of her own, so I knew I had to add it into the confrontation. And yes, Sue does hesitate, though only for a moment, which lets Shannon believe that her desperate offer might actually work.
Stay tuned for part 2, which will hopefully be done sometime next week!