Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 57

As fun as the fight is between the two shrunken women, how is that possible now? Earlier its stated that with reduced size the durability of the body increases so that a tiny can even survive being squeezed under a toe or an asscheek but now a tiny elbow can hurt a tiny nose?

Author's Response: This is actually a really interesting question, and I’d like to take a moment to explain my reasoning. Now, considering the most popular trope of how a person shrinks, where “The space between the molecules shrinks”, barring any problems with the physics of possibility, this would increase a person’s density, which would in turn make their bodies more durable and harder to break. However, this doesn’t make the person invincible, as I’ve shown with Ray being squished. So, why did Chris survive being stepped on, but Ray did not?

Consider this example: you are lying in the middle of a football field at the 50 yard line, and a huge piece of paper over the top of you that spans end zone to end zone, and sideline to sideline. You would certainly notice a weight on your body but you could easily push the paper up and roll out from underneath it. Now let’s fill that paper in half and place you underneath the middle of it again, the pressure would be increased, but you probably still be fine. However, the more the paper is folded, the more pressure you’d feel. Eventually it will get hard to breathe, hard to move, and it might actually be heavy enough to crush you. The paper’s weight hasn’t changed, but the force it’s applying feels like it’s increased. In actuality, it hasn’t, but when the paper is unfolded, it’s weight is being distributed over a large area, and you’re only feeling the weight of what is actually in top of you. The more the paper is folded, the less area over which the force is applied. Each time Chris was stepped on, he ended up in the middle of a person’s sole, where the least amount of weight across the foot is applied. Ray, however, was under the ball of Shannon’s foot, where far more weight is applied—Enough, in my world, to crush him. However, each time Chris was stepped on, he wasn’t technically “unharmed”, though he certainly felt it. Basically, in my world, when a tiny person survives being stepped on or sat on, they are under a person’s fleshy sole, or on the cushion of a couch—or any soft surface that can help absorb and ease the immense pressure.

This leads me back to your question about the tiny fight between Sue Ann and Shannon. Despite Sue Ann being just as small, the density of her elbow increases in proportion to how much she shrinks, and when she applies that force over a small area (her elbow into Shannon’s nose) the increased density of Sue Ann’s elbow compensates for the increased density of Shannon’s nose.

Remember though, this is all fantasy and fiction. Sure, it’s my world, and the physics may not actually work out that way, but I’ll at least try to explain my reasoning(s). I hope that answers your questions.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2019 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 57

“fatal consequences”?? God! What a talent you have for cliffhangers!!  I will cry a lot if Chris ends up killed by Rachel… and so will herself I think. More than that, at that size and the lack of air, he will certainly die if someone doesn’t find him and give the antidote! Congrats on your accurate description of Chris situation as a micro. I saw in a video that if shrinking was possible, the person wouldn’t  be heard and would have a hard time breathing, eventually losing conscious and dying.

Can’t wait to see how Rachel will look like for him and her reactions when she realizes everything… grantted Chris has been stepped before, but, now everything human-sized must be pure torture for him – the smell, the sound of the voice… – and he is already weak…

About the chapter, the interaction between Chris and Sue Ann is simply marvelous, the way you describe the pleasure she felt of having Chris inside her… and the way she recognizes that Chris sacrificed his own safety for her sake… oh yeah. She might have said that she wasn’t interested in him when they were in her house… but I wonder about now. Have I ever said the triangle is my favorite geometric form? XDDD

Chris is obviously outside after Mrs. Carlson cleaned her left foot… Just, please, don’t make Noren get there before Rachel…

POSSIBLE SPOILER AHEAD

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My fan theory for the next chapter:

My guess is that Rachel will get there first, steps on micro Chris, trapping him, but won’t find Sue Ann, who is unconscious. She picks Shannon purse. Then Nooren gets there and asks what is going on. Rachel tries to lie her way out of the conversation. Noren sits on the chair and tell Rachel about all the strange things that are happening around Chris, her weird “dream” of him being little… Rachel opens up, desperate for any help finding Chris and Sue Ann. That’s when Noren fell something odd at her toes, as if someone was smacking her big toe… It’s Sue Ann, and she breaks the news Chris is microscopic. Both giantess worried, sit on the couch and spread their toes for Sue Ann inspect… She find the tiny speck right in the middle of Rachel’s ball… she has to pell him out of all the dirty and sweat… he doesn’t show any sign of life… they try the antidote, but that only grow him back a few inches, barely enough for him to be heard again… still, no reaction.

As for Rachel’s reaction to all that… meanwhile, Shannon tastes hell stuck beneath Mrs. Carlson.

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Please, almighty author, bless us with the next (possible final) chapter!!

PS. Sorry for any mistakes in the text. Blame the excitement XDDD

 

Author's Response: First off, I wasn’t initially planning on ending on a cliffhanger, the chapter just got a bit too long.

Secondly, I’ve stated in other reviews that I like to keep my stories as accurate and believable as possible....relatively speaking, of course. There have been requests to have Chris going to micro size, but that posed some speculation on what would really happen. I’ve also seen videos on YouTube saying why shrinking would be impossible, or what would happen if something really could shrink, so I added those aspects in.
To expand on that, a lot of story elements in these last two chapters actually came last minute: I always was planning on having Shannon shrink, but I’ve been debating on whether Sue Ann would shrink too. I also debated on Chris becoming microscopic. I ultimately decided on having everyone shrink, and Chris making a heroic leap to stop Shannon from shrinking Sue Ann helped blend resolve all the issues on how exactly to do it. And yes, it does pose an interesting thought as to how Sue Ann feels about him now.

As far as your fan theory, you’ll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out.