[Report This]Date: January 31 2023 12:31 AM Title: Epilogue
The best story about giantess I've ever read! I've always had this fetish for as long as I can remember, and I've always loved reading these kinds of macrophilia stories, until I found this one that stands out above all the others!
The way the story is written, the dialogues, the texts, the cliffhangers, the characters, the plots, the stories and alternatives, everything is amazing!
I really got addicted to this story, so much so that I finished all 60 chapters in 1 week hehe but everything is wonderful! There was always something happening in the story that you didn't expect, it was never predictable at any point and I never got bored in any chapter, they are all very very amazing!
The only thing I didn't like was Shannon's ending, I grew very fond of him despite what he did to Chris hehe
But everything else is wonderful.
I wish there would be a spin-off of this series in the future, to find out more about these characters, or an alternative history of:
What would happen if Shannon became a giant the size of a building?...
Or what if Chris cringes from Rachel or Sue Ann, and they find they can't resist the urge to have Chris and play with him?...
Or what if Chris stayed with Shannon and they lived together in the Caribbean forever, as an alternate ending?...
There are many places to explore this story! You can also continue the alternative stories that are already there, like part 2 of Rachel taking care of a shrunken Chris and seeing how he sometimes has fun with him.
Or a part 2 of Mr. Carson.
You could even follow up with a bigger and bigger Shannon part 2!
There are also many alternative stories to enjoy!
I hope that one day my request can be fulfilled, as long as it can of course hehe
I congratulate you for making such a good story.
Regards!
Author's Response:
Well, thank you so much for your review and encouragement!
I have had requests to do some more spin-off chapters, including one where Shannon grows into a giantess, but as I’m not used to writing that kind of story, I’ve put it on indefinite hold until I can find the inspiration and drive to produce a good quality chapter.
In the meantime, I’ve been working on a couple of new projects: the biggest being one my next novel: “Little, Big Brother.” (Check out the preview in my “Upcoming Stories Preview”) However, while you have given me a glowing review on THIS novel, I’ve received some constructive feedback from other readers on things I need to work on. So, for the last several months, I’ve been working on a story to do just that. It’s going to be more scenario focused as opposed to plot focused, with the overall goal being to hone the various interactions, situations, and scenarios that I’ll want to use in my larger works, as I really want my novels to be of the highest quality.
With all that being said, I invite you to check out my other works and leave feedback on what you think, along with feedback on this upcoming work. I really want to know the story details you like and dislike, and for some suggestions on my encounters so I can focus on how to improve them and provide a satisfying experience for everyone.
Once again, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2023 12:51 PM Title: Epilogue
Hello! Passing just to wish you a Happy New Year. May 2023 be full of
peace and inspiration for all of us!
Date: July 20 2021 5:46 PM Title: Epilogue
Hey, Shrinker! As it has been a few months, I wanted to check back in to see if there was any progress on the giantess Shannon alternate chapters? I know you're still working on closing out your other story, but how are things coming with the giantess Shannon outline? Any thoughts on timing? Very excited to read it!
Author's Response:
I wish I had better news for you, but unfortunately, it’s been slow going. Most of the progress I’ve made has been with the outline, and it’s really starting to become a larger project than I thought. I’m trying like mad to finish up my current story and focus my all my energy towards the alternate ending; thankfully, I have only have about 2-3 chapters left, at the most, and that includes the epilogue. Unfortunately, those chapters are also slow going, even with everything all laid out. Once I get started on the alternate chapter, I’ll try to finish it within a couple of months. Hopefully, I’ll have everything finished by the end of the year....at least that’s my goal.
Date: April 16 2021 3:00 PM Title: Epilogue
Hey! Thought I'd check in to see if there's a status update on the new Shannon alternate ending. I'm guessing you won't be able to put it up until after With Great Power is wrapped up (which is also an awesome story!). Also, any thoughts on how big Shannon might grow? Looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for checking in!
Yes, the alternate giantess Shannon ending has been delayed due to having to rework the ending of “With Great Power...”, but fear not, it is in the works, and the outline is coming along, though it’s nowhere near complete.
I’m thinking of having Shannon grow through various sizes: 6-7 feet, 10-15ft, to 20-25ft; then, I’d like to have her grow to about 50ft, and then to around 100ft tall, and possibly a little bigger. Basically, I want those involved to have to experience her at multiple sizes, though ultimately still manageable. I plan to have a lot of feet action, as well as ass and pussy insertion.
It’s going to be a massive chapter (and a massive undertaking) so keep checking back!
[Report This]Date: February 06 2021 3:53 PM Title: Epilogue
Definitely my favourite giantess story ever, I've read thousands of stories similar to it but nothing quite matches the writing skill on display here. I'd murder to see a short sequel post epilogue. Maybe Chris gets stuck due to some unforseen issue with the antidote (Running out, it spills, he's immune to it, etc.) and has to wait for a specially made one to come in for him.
Author's Response:
Well, thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate them right now considering the backlash with my current story: “With Great Power...”. If you have read that one, and have paid attention to the reviews as of late, many people did not like the ending to that story.
You certainly are the first one who’s asked for a sequel/spin-off with Chris and Sue Ann. Well I don’t currently have any plans to write a sequel, I’ll certainly keep it in mind as it seems to be a story that many people like.
Date: February 06 2021 10:46 AM Title: Epilogue
LOL! You got me all hyped thinking the story was updated! Ok. About the giantess Shannon chapter, it doesn't have to be one chapter. You cand divide in many chapters and post as an alternative babysitter trouble.
If I have any new ideas I will post (unfortunately, work is taking up most of my time and imagination right now T_T)
Author's Response:
Yes, as I said, I didn’t mean to get anyone’s hopes up. I absolutely couldn’t believe that when I looked back at the chapters, all the formatting was off. The biggest issue was that apparently all of my apostrophes and “” marks turned into “?”. It was practically every chapter! Slowly but surely I’ll get them all fixed.
And also yes, the ultimate ending about Shannon being a giantess is going to be big....Like, really big! It’s possible it might even turn into a multi chapter alternate ending. Where I plan on picking things up for the story arc are around chapter 53, when Shannon has Ray stuck in her ass, and because it’s going to be a big project (at least from a single chapter standpoint), it’s going to take a lot of outlining and planning. I’ll be sure to update everyone as to its progress.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2020 3:51 AM Title: Epilogue
Rating of the whole story: 7/10.
I can say right now, your strengths are that youre descriptive. You know how to set up a story and setting and youre very good at dialogue. One of the things i really enjoyed as a whole of this entire series was the character developement of shannon and a few of the others. How their quirks were slowly revealed. It was like reading an official book.
This leads me to talk about the shortcomings too: first, i would say remove the vore tag. Apart from 2 mouthplay situations... the vore is beyond an utter disappointment as there basically is none and this undeserving of the tag which can be misleading to vore hopefuls. If you desire examples on good vore stories where the prey survives, i can recommedn "Holly the freshman" and "a weekend adventure". Those show vore and mouth done superbly.
Another thing is when you have a 60 plus chapter story, its hard not to make situations repetetive. It actually became alittle laborious to read through near identical situations where Chris is underfoot/in ass/in pussy shouting the same help me lines from 3 chapters before. The only thing that kept me from skimming over them was my desire to be thorough so i can present a valid review.
All in all: great story telling, developement and descriptive events.
Work on: fulfilling vore when it is a tag, avoiding overusing repetetive situations and lines excessively.
All in all a solid series
Author's Response:
First off, thank you so much for your review. This type of review categorizing my strengths and weaknesses really does help me grow and improve as a writer.
To each of your points, I went ahead and removed the “Vore” tag because you were correct, there was really only one chapter (plus an alternate) that dealt with mouth play.
When I started this project, I wasn’t expecting it to turn out as long as it was. If I’d have known I was writing a novel, I would’ve changed several things at the beginning of the story, and several others moving forward. Since you read the whole thing, you could probably tell the writing improved as the story progressed, and I agree, several things became repetitive, probably because I had so many things I wanted to have happen with several characters.
Moving forward, I’m planning out my stories better, and trying to gage how long my future stories with be before I even start writing. If you haven’t checked them out yet, I urge you to read my short story, “Honey, Don’t Squish Me”, and my current multi-chapter project, “With Great Power...”.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2019 3:20 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow, you uploaded a few chapters since I last reviewed and I can’t believe how behind I am! I mean, you already finished! I don’t think I actually expected it since there have been way too many past authors I followed that would never finish their story, so I’m kinda glad you reached a conclusion.
Although, I’m not the biggest fan of Rachel, I like how you created her; the girlfriend, but loves Chris so much that it almost terrifies him to an extent. There have been multiples times where Rachel’s clumsiness has comprised he mission.
Sue Ann really has grown as a character for me. I remember always wishing for you to introduce her back to the story and I removed you would take forever, but once you got her into the mix, I got really into her.
However, by the time Sue Ann returned, Mrs. Carson was the one who stole my heart. She was the one that turned me on the most and I loved how she interacted with Chris, not just for the alternate chapter, but also the multiple close calls in the main story.
I liked the involvement of all the main characters in the last few chapters. I also liked the big surprise of Shannon stuck under Mrs. Carson’s foot. Lol. Also, a tiny Sue Ann made me scared since I actually feared maybe Rachel might step on her.
Hmm, I noticed a heavy amount of feet content in the final battle, I don’t think I need to include examples since it was about a third of the battle. I didn’t mind too much since I was able to breeze through it.
Let’s not forget that Shannon managed to stick Chris inside Sue Ann’s pussy. That was the best scene in the battle for me. It almost made Sue Ann struggle to keep her composure due to how turned on she was. Glad you referenced that moment in the epilogue.
I thought it was strange for Sue Ann to keep Shannon as a pet. In addition, it seems like Sue Ann actually tried to take care of Shannon really well which I find strange since they were enemies for the entire story. I thought maybe Sue Ann would torture Shannon or something instead.
Lastly, I loved the epilogue. I wanted Sue Ann to be kinky with Chris but all we got was the gentle version of her during the story. Now in this last chapter, we get to see how Sue Ann truly felt when Chris was inside her. She wants him and I like how she remembered that he was 18 before having sex with him. It shows that she cares about his age unlike Shannon.
After reading this epilogue, I couldn’t help but imagine some side story with Chris and Sue Ann. Imagine a tale where Chris could visit Sue Ann everyday for the summer and get a daily does of shrinkage for some giantess fun and then he could use the antidote to return home without his parents worrying again. There could be times where his parents would go away for a weekend and Sue Ann could keep Chris shrunk all weekend. They could even sleep together ;) Also, 3 inches is my favorite size for Chris and I’m aware of all the little fun that they could interact with at that size. Boy, Chris is one lucky guy.
Congrats on such an amazing story! I can’t wait for your next installment!
Author's Response: It’s nice to see you back; I was getting a little worried.
I’m glad you liked the direction I took all of the characters. I hadn’t intended on including a couple of them when I first started the story, but they kind of took on a life of their own.
I’d always planned on having Shannon shrink permanently at the end of the story, and for Sue Ann to keep and take care of her; However, I hadn’t planned on having Sue Ann shrink too, nor for Chris to enter the micro world. I suppose, given how I made that rivalry between them, that it would be odd that Suanne would keep Shannon as a pet. I did think it fitting, however, for Shannon to be stepped on and stuck to somebody’s foot; Like I said, karma at its finest. Oh, and that part about Chris being shoved inside Sue Ann by Shannon, that was inspired by YOUR suggestion, I just took some artistic license.
I’m glad that you like the epilogue; After introducing Rachel, I thought it best to have them end up together, but I always wanted to have a scene between Sue Ann and Chris. Although I currently have no plans to revisit the story, if I ever do, I’d probably continue it where things left off, and explore the fun things that Sue and Chris can do together.
Lastly, I want to see how much I appreciate all of your reviews, suggestions, and support over the course of the story. You are probably my favorite reader, and I always enjoy reading your reviews. I was actually wondering if you weren’t a fan of the end of the story, since you hadn't posted a review for a while. I certainly hope you add me to your favorite authors, and read and review the other stories I plan to post. Thank you so much for your readership!
Date: December 25 2019 10:47 PM Title: Epilogue
Great final part! Cant wait to see what you create next!
Author's Response: After I finish he last alternate chapter for this story, I plan to post some shorter stories, or stories with at most 10 chapters. I’ve had several commission requests, however, so those might be next in line.
[Report This]Date: December 25 2019 8:34 PM Title: Epilogue
You were absolutely right. I loved the epilogue. Rachel and Chris made sense in the universe of the series finale, but, this epilogue with Chris and Sue Ann was just soooo sweet! I know you won't do a continuation now, but I sure hope to see it some day.
Thanks for everything. You are in my favorites.
Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you liked it. I thought an ending where Chris and Sue Ann hook up in the future could be really sweet as well, especially making his childhood dream come true. If I ever decide to revisit the story, I might add another alternate chapter catch, or I might pick things up in the future with an older Chris, Rachel, and Sue Ann.
[Report This]Date: December 25 2019 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue
Well....I dont know how to feel about the epilogue....
I loved him and Rachel together....and I hate the let's take a break to see other people thing....
I like that him and sue Ann had a cute moment together
But I prefer him and Rachel
I thought you were gonna do an alternate ending with him and sue ann
So the epilogue was cute but I prefer it never happened.
Sorry for my complaints.
Merry Christmas and a happy new year.
Author's Response: Eh, don’t worry about the complaints. Like I’d said before, Chapter 59 is technically the last chapter of the story; the epilogue is more of an afterthought. As long as you enjoyed the bulk of the story, that’s what I really care about.