Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2022 4:36 AM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Awesome! At the size people would look about 4 inches tall to Shannon.  While I'd love to see her bigger, she will still have a lot of of footplay fun!  Hopefully 4 inch Chris will be lured in... can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Oh, Chris won’t be “people” sized for a bit, so the compared to Shannon, he’s gonna be quite a bit smaller.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2022 7:37 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Hi! Is there any chance you will be writing part 2 of this alternate ending? It's really terrific and I can't wait to see what Shannon will do as a real giantess!

Author's Response:

Hey there,

     First off, yes, I am ABSOLUTELY planning to finish the alternate chapter; unfortunately, the progress has been slow, and I’ve hit a few roadblocks along the way:

     To start, as I’m sure I’ve mentioned before, I’ve never actually written a growth story before, so I was hesitant to just “put something out there” without outlining it and really hammering down the details. You and several other readers have expressed interest in seeing Shannon as a giantess because of her personality, and I want to provide a good quality story arc exploring it. Obviously, I can’t please everyone, but I know if I take my time — and consider all of your suggestions — I can provide something the community will like.

     That being said, not long after I posted the first part of this chapter, I fractured by arm in a cycling accident. Thankfully, it was only a partial break. I’m practically fully healed now, but the whole ordeal, coupled with a busy schedule at work, left me in a bad emotional state, and aside from jotting down a few ideas now and then, I haven’t really been in the mood to do much writing lately. Rather than try to force myself, I felt it better to take a break, focus on healing, and come back it when I was ready.

     As sort of a stop-gap, I’ve turned to posting some pics on Deviant Art, and to keep my writing skills fresh, I added some story/captions to several of the photos. I’m hoping that the photos might provide some inspiration and motivation to continue my current and future stories on the coming months. Until then, thank you for all your feedback, suggestions, and reviews that have given me the motivation and inspiration to keep moving forward and continue my work!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2021 4:50 AM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

This alternate is shaping up to be awesome! I always thought Shannon had the perfect personality to be a true giantess, and now it's coming true! I really hope you explore both her and Chris' psychology as she grows.  I can only visualize her smile as the world shrinks before her eyes. I wonder how large she'll get...poor cops! I also really hope there's a lot more footplay and lots of perspective from the tinies' POV. Hope will hey stop giantess Shannon? Will Rachel grow too or will the world become Shannon's foot toy? I can't wait to read more, and I hope the next part is coming along well!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2021 2:50 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Coming back to these characters, I can’t help but feel a mix of joy and exitement. Rachel and Chris playing is just as sweet as the first time. And I missed your detailled writing so Much!! Took me the entire night, but I finally came up with a scenario I think is interesting

Shannon growing... there are a few questions about that. First, how big is she and what is her state of mind after becoming a real giantess. It’s easy to assume her ego will skyrocket and she will act as a dominatrix, I am sure that’s what some of her fans expect – Shannon having her way with houses or even buildings. but there could be other side effects that will settle in as time passes, like with her obsession over Chris getting a huge boost. But finding him just became a lot harder now.

So she might just go for the obvious and march back to where it all begun. It’s not rational, but, again, I don’t believe this new formula is 100% safe, especially in large doses. For all we know Shannon could be more monster driven by desire than human now.  This will put Rachel and her Family in danger and Chris once again in a colision course with his nemesis.

Shannon rampages and then goes after Rachel and her mother to get to Chris, destroying their house... buuuuut..., the growth effect start to wear off. Shannon flees the scene with Ray (still trapped somewhere in her body) and a very angry, very traumatized Rachel in her hands, wanting to make more formula. Obviously she is still very big, so Sue Ann and Chris are fast on her track.

Shannon demands an even more powerfull formula. Ray is actually too scared to argue, but, truth to her vow of protecting Chris, Rachel take advantage of Shannon deranged state and manages to drink the formula herself.

As she grows bigger, scenes of what can be described as a nightmare flashes in her impressionable mind, mingling with reality. Shannon torturing Chris, Chris begging for her help on the floor of her house, Shannon destroying their home... She will make her pay.

The growth serum doesn’t seem to stop, making Rachel increasingly unstable towards the now almost unrecognizable tiny world beneath. Thinking this is all his fault and believing Rachel will never hurt him, Chris marchs on to distract his girlfriend (putting a stop to the destruction) and convince to take the shrinkink serum.

I am just so excited to see na update from this, I tried to write a comment as fast as I could. Sorry for any mistakes or confusion, I wrote this in a hurry because of work. You can spin this ideas around as you see fit.

I think this will give everyone something to be happy, while not being just a reenact of the final fight we already know. We have Giant Shannon playing with the city, we have her retribution at the hands of Rachel and Rachel herself rampaging and having more moments with... well not tiny Chris, because she will be the one who is big XD (which can be either sweet or heartbreaking... or both?)

You can spin this ideas around as you see fit.

Thank you so much for not abandoning this project. You are a very talented and very honest writer, one of the top on this site!