Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 08 Closing & Extras

Cool story. Loved Susan. Having Phil shrink himself was cool. He deserves to be small. What an idiot.

Author's Response:

I was orginally going to have Susan crush Phil with her high heel, and afterwards she'd report it to the police as an "accident" pinning the blame all on her husband and collecting his life insurance. The thought of making the entitled dirtbag a young girl's tiny slave was too good to pass up, so I ended killing Tom off instead in order to keep things interesting.