[Report This]Date: August 03 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter One
It is a nice story. please continue to write this story.
Date: February 05 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Ahh, interesting story. I've never seen The Incredible Shrinking Man but I like what you've done here.
I wonder what he'll do to win over his daughter. I thought she was sleeping that night! Poor Chris. Alas, its been awhile since you've updated.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2008 9:09 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
It's been along time but am happy to see some more chapters. I hope this story will have a happy ending and not a sad one. But any way very good job.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2007 12:28 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
I love the plot to the story thus far, Its nice to see something that feels like an actual story. That isn't done as much as it use too. I hope you continue this, its great, and the writing mistakes can be easily overlooked for the overall enjoyable story.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2007 9:44 PM Title: Chapter Six
I like the pace you're taking with it all. This has been a fun read, thank you for the last two chapters. I look forward to the next.
Date: August 09 2007 12:01 PM Title: Chapter One
I like the idea alot VORD! nice story. I cant wait till Carrie and her father are reunited. I am hoping she is not too nice to him after she finds him. I am sure you have read them but you probably could look over LITTLE AFFECTION and A SMALL SHRINK TALE for ideas to include in the future.
I am not on here too often anymore so when I saw this story, it caught my eye! I look forward to more installments in the near future. ( unaware is ok to me but I like it alot when the girl starts off treating tghe shrunken man one way and then within time, she realizes that hes no more than an insect to her and cant help but treat him as such!
sorta wish she were older though but maybe after you have him spend some time with the 12 year old carrie, we can shift years into the future say to when shes 15 or 16 and then when shes in college too!! haha
keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much hertinypal... I really appreciate your help, but Carrie is 17, I guess I should have posted a note of that in my story, my bad. I think I will take a look at those stories. My basic idea for the story though is that, after all these years Carrie does find her father and is somewhat confused over... and maybe she does get a little angry because I mean she's been wondering for 12 years about what happened and she assumes that her father just left.
[Report This]Date: August 08 2007 11:52 PM Title: Chapter Three
I'm really enjoying this story, and didn't think that I would. The first chapter and setup just didn't seem too interesting to me. Though, as I've read, I'm really finding myself drawn into the story and I love what I'm seeing. Thank you so much.
Date: August 08 2007 6:57 PM Title: Chapter Four
im sorry but this chapter made me laugh. Its a bug that will take some blood, chris made it seem like she would die. Its just funny.
Author's Response: Hey it's his view... of course from our view a mosquito is nothing but a pest. But to him, well yeah. That's pretty much the point.
Date: August 07 2007 12:01 AM Title: Chapter One
Hey, Vord! Interesting start here. I'm rooting for the dad. Here's hoping they reunite. (After some crazy misadventures, of course.)
Author's Response: Hey what can I say? I just have talent I never thought to be use. I'm hoping to build the story this time, a somewhat similar feel, but indifferent feel. I hope to put up the next chapter at least by the end of this week. May have to go back to back on Chapter 3 and 4 by the week after and so on.