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Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2007 12:28 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

I love the plot to the story thus far, Its nice to see something that feels like an actual story. That isn't done as much as it use too. I hope you continue this, its great, and the writing mistakes can be easily overlooked for the overall enjoyable story.

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