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Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 14

what a great idea turning someone into a virtual character also with the update and uploading him. totally loved the taur part the most. and the masturbating in front of the pc. ashley butt naked was also very hot to think about.

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2020 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

Had so much fun reading this. The playful cruel sinister play of Ashley is so damn good I want to read more and more of that and cant get enough. Totally wish to see more like this. I love how is is still kind to Toby and this might totally change from one moment to another if Ashley loses interest in him or gets disappointed. I love how Ashley is a mix of extremes and has no empathy for example that part him wanting to be called boyfriend bu tToby wanted it so far be friends. How Ashley ignores his pray and toy is so hot while he still can hear all his words but Toby cant. And the entire who cares element, literally sealing the fate of those, and using Toby for putting the trigger was so so damn hot. Would like to see this more happening and Toby kinda stay unaware about the cruel torture going on.

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

the last two chapters were so good because of a total Ashley comeback and focusing around him, the ashley chapters are soo much better than missing out o him, the idea of uploading poor jimmy as a virtual character into the internet was awesome, I wonder if he encounters ashley again. couldnt be more cruel how ashley manipulated his former roomate into not caring for Jimmy and then even enjoiyng torturing him, without knowing kinda.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

What a great idea crativ as usual. Would had love if the minotaur used him as a toilet too after raping his throat. I had so many other ideas for what could have happened I just love this chapter, totally one of my favorites now. This story is just totally amazing.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

This couldnt have been any better what an incredible idea. My favorite part was the minotaur and dragon. Of course I liked it. I totally have it in front of my eyes how Ashley just put his hand on Tobys head and ... PUSH and he rams towards his monitor.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 14

really liked the idea!! This reminded me on an old cartoon I watched as a kid captain n.

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