Date: April 22 2020 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
my favorite part was with the toilet paper especialy if it being the young boy becoming literally a brown nowser for phil very hot would maybe like to see a part where the toilet paper is nearly empty in a follow up chapter and the boy kinda has his last service.
Date: April 17 2020 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Really great chapter as always.
Date: April 13 2020 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
the last few chapters were realy hot. I have to say I am more into cruel plots so the tooilet paper idea was god like. would wish to Ashley abandon Toby by time though maybe or turn him too into some thing and kill him off. the phil part was my favorite in this chapter. loved the boy whining and screaming and geting a mouth full of his shit taste lol.
Date: April 12 2020 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
totaly continued in the same as the last 2 chapters. would had liked it even more if Ashley had played with Toby in some morbid way.
Date: April 11 2020 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
Totally my thing with the toilet paper especialy of turning an entire family into rolls was my favorite part. Phil using the paper then and also the soap was also my favorite, and how Toby was totally not aware at first about it. Ashley being playful as usual was also great. Would had maybe liked it even more of Toby wouldtt have been successful and used someone without finding out. Phil totally having some protein power shits there loved that part.
Date: April 11 2020 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
So many different ideas was a first for you I loved it. Especially the TP part was hot. But the part of a two sided fleshlight was ... ugh so hot. Also of them wearing it kinda as a condom over night I wonder how she looks like and happens the next day ...
Date: April 11 2020 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
One of the best shopping experienes I ever had lol. Very well done. Happy Easter to you. I noticed a lot of tiny spelling mistakes btw, mostly you fliped your and youre over 20 times or so haha. But dont worry, that wasnt a problem at all to follow the story. Noticed more than usual mistakes here and there next to the your thing, some tenses. But the chapter was still awesome. Loved the ending with Phil with using it as gel for a hand job lol.