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Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2020 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

The bathroom scene was pure gold would had loved if he just had a piss too and the anus girl with a shocked stare just followed the golden strem just inches away from her mouth. I loved that entire ass transformtion totally making me hard every time.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2020 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

all around butt insertion tf and anus tf or penis tf are totally my favorit. wonder if cloe also gets turned into something sooner or later. loved the how Hanna was totalls ilence and not saying anything after being used as an anus. I liked it tiny bit more when ashley as doing things by himself where he kinda reacted differently then being with someone else I dont want him to be too different than compared to the half first of the story which I loved so much. really likey the bunny and cat suit idea haha

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2020 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 16

One of the best parts was whenAshley muted her should I mute her, yes, and then just put his penis head on her "lips". Would really like if Toby eventually just goes in the same spider web as all the other people and Ashley get rid of him in a very cruel plot twist. Phil is also one of my bost of the plot I love, I see him as the quaterback of the team.

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2020 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

totly enjoyed the asshole tf idea that was so hot, and the best part was the toilet use and the conversation on the floor in between of the former best friend hannah was telling that lines.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

Kinky and dark just my taste, ass plots are the best he. Would had enjoyed it if the other girl also was turned into something, but I loved the ironic jokes especially the let us open her more with the next time we meet be more open between us two lol, and the being an asshole of course.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

Did not see any mistakes honesstly I tried to look for them, was written perfectly. And I really enjoyed this chapter. I just have a thing for party plots. The transformation was also really great.

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

I’m honestly not a fan of transformation like at all (which is why my favorite chapter of this story is when Ashely shrinks the woman at the store to dislodge what was blocking up his intestines so he could use the bathroom), but your expert writing and build up makes it hard not to read your stories when you post them lol. Loved this chapter tho (shrunken women are def my favorite so that helped). Really hoping Ash and Toby find a way to get Chloe as well

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