This is no doubt an amazing story! The most impressive part is the creativity. I have never seen a story like this before and its funny becuase this is the type of stuff that I think about everyday. "What if I was this person..." and so on.

The first chapter was the best and I think it was because there was so much going on and his mother was just super horny. Even though I'm not a fan of incest, this was very entertaining. Mostly due to his mother's sexually agressive nature.

I wonder why it took so long for him to think of a celebrity and his wife to transform into. That would have been my first option when I'm thinking of the most goergeous women to have fun with. A simple Google search can help Austin a lot in this story. Also, if he really wants to have his last memory be something specific before he sleeps, just use a smart phone and stare at whoever it is until he gets sleepy.

Since Austin is 15, I imagine him being in school and I'm wondering if he might dream of his hot teacher and possibly becoming her husband. School would get so much better. He might get sent to detention with the hot teacher and her husband shows up to tell her something and Austin snaps a pic before he leaves.

Or he sees a nerdy looking boy with a good looking woman and he thinks of the boy, only to wake up in that boy's body and realize that he is tied up and the woman just uses him all night and that's why she keeps him. She forces him to lick her and please her and Austin reawakens in his own room with a sore tongue.

This story is awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter! (Ps. Do you reply to reviews?)

Author's Response:

Thankyou for the suggestions. There are many circumstances that can happen to Austin and I already have in mind some limitations to his body switching that he hasn't figured out yet that I need to wrap into the stories.