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Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 18 2021 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 7: Apology

Great chapter, but had to deduct a star due to no anal play to close things out. Anon already had a ton of pussy fun, but no anal? You'd think Starfire at least would want him to stick his dick up her butt or at least pleasure her rectum from the inside, if Raven wasn't willing!



Author's Response:

Understandable. Unfortunately, there was just no good spot for anal. I agree the two of them would be game, but just based on the situation they were all in, it just didn't fit. Raven would be the type to require the perfect circumstances to get her to be bold enough to be honest about her desires and shove Anon up her ass. Starfire would always be done for it, but in this specific situation, she felt like she was on a tightrope, struggling to avoid anything that might scare Raven and Anon off. Anon would be the type to do some exploration there, but like Raven he would need assurances that the experience wouldn't be unpleasant for him. 

 

I could have possibly fit some anal into the chapter, but it was already pushing past 15k so I had to call it. Very sorry I wasn't able to fit it in! Who knows? Maybe I'll include a bonus chapter focused entirely on anal. Jynx seems the type to just go for it, no safety net.

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