Date: July 04 2022 4:14 AM Title: I / Me / Myself
I really liked the shopping scene. Especially the tension that was built up. I felt Aaron’s worry as even I felt that he could’ve been punished at any moment.
We already know how powerful Emma is, so that uneasiness is kinda fun to watch as Aaron struggles with that fear.
Also, I love how Emma is portrayed as this amazing person to the public, but for Aaron, he sees her as his living nightmare. He wants to escape, but fears the consequences. Man, I love it!
The body changing scenes are so cool and sometimes confusing lol. I swear, I never get used to who is doing what to who lol. But then again, Emma is in control about 99% of the time I think I understood this time.
At the end, I like how he shrunk and she is currently holding him under the blanket so he can’t see anything and is trapped with all that body heat. Would love to see her slide his tiny body down between her legs and sleep with him trapped down there. Lol.
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!
Trying to explore the characters a bit! Makes the sexy parts a lot more fun when you can understand the motives of the people behind them.
Glad you enjoy it. It'll keep going!
Date: January 24 2022 8:22 AM Title: A Doctor of Self-Doubt
After all this time, I still think it’s great how Aaron is furious about his current position in life, while I’m simply dreaming of taking his place.
Being Emma’s sex toy might be one of the hottest things ever and the cherry on top is when her favorite spot to keep him was in her underwear. Man, I would love to hear Emma describe how and why she loves to keep him down there. Perhaps we have the same reasons and simply find it a complete turn on.
I like how Dominique is telling Aaron to endure this lifestyle for weeks and possibly months just for the chance to escape. If it was me, I would be doing the opposite. I would act like I’m sneaky, maybe pretend like I’m escaping, and get Emma to keep me in her panties all the time. Haha!
I’m just so glad this story is back and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Just a little bit unwilling makes it that much more fun. And I like your idea of having Emma explain why her favorite home for him is her underwear, if you see that in later chapters, it's thanks to you.
I'm glad you like it! I hope the rest meets your expectations.
Date: August 16 2021 1:41 AM Title: Procrastination
Glad to see you return with this story.
I always love it when Emma imagines all these crazy, but sexy ideas. It's like she could plan weeks worth of experiments with Aaron and control him in so many ways.
This whole media/boyfriend idea seems very complicated. It's hard for me to even predict where you are going with it.
I also like how Emma isn't sold on Aaron being completely obedient to her. Part of me wants him to mess up such as when he was alone on her computer so that way we could see Emma punish him again. Haha!
Well, it's great to see this story return and I can't wait for the next chapter!
So glad you like it! I've got a sex-rich environment and a seed of potential plot. That's just how I like it; an end is coming but I'm still not sure how to get there.
Date: December 16 2020 12:06 PM Title: Editorial Discretion
Glad to see this story get updated.
Wow, Emma really likes his butt. Even began to daydream about it for some time. Haha.
Hmm, it's interesting to see what Emma will do whether she makes Aaron public or not. I think it's best for her to keep him private because once she goes public with him, the media will be going crazy about who is Emma's new boyfriend. If she keeps him private, Emma will still have options about what she plans with Aaron.
The issue is what happens when her boyfriend explains it to the media. If Emma denies it, I think the public will likely believe her. Or she can accept it, but not use Aaron as an reason. I still think she should leave out that little detail.
Mmhmm, I love the crossing leg trap that Emma did to him. I was thinking that instead of trapping Aaron under her right thigh, she could trap him against her crotch in the tiny gap between her legs while she crosses her legs so he would be completely surrounded by her legs. There would be an opening above him, and he could see Emma simply ignoring him while her legs keep him snug against her.
Glad to see another update, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks! It's fun, in a way, to write the sadist into a tangled mess of her own making.
Date: October 11 2020 8:42 PM Title: First Day on the Job, but For Real
Now this chapter is very different from the rest.
We got her boyfriend who I guess just left her, and now we got Aaron doing chores that aren't sexual? Lol, this is strange indeed.
Glad to see this story return, I miss it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
The breakaway is partly for fun, partly to experiment. A lot of my stories follow a similar narrative path that I, frankly, haven't figured out how to close. Once I figure out what needs to come next, I hope you won't be disappointed.
Date: April 23 2020 2:32 PM Title: First Day on the Job
Great Story so far! Will their be an update soon? I'm dying to find out what happens next!
I really appreciate the kind words! If I must be honest, 'soon' is a very flexible concept when I am writing this stuff.
Date: December 22 2018 5:40 PM Title: First Day on the Job
Yup, me again
I see you've fallen into making a story that at least has the illusion of some kind of meaning, and the erotic stuff's still spectacular too, so that's great.
Recently, I tripped and fell into a bookshelf, and one of the books fell out and hit me in the head. I fear it may have transferred some ideas of a storyline to me.
Don't worry. It'll work itself out soon enough.
Date: September 16 2018 3:21 PM Title: First Day on the Job
Enjoying this so far. Please continue this. Any chance you could give Aaron another full tour experience through Emma, but we see the entire trip this time through his POV?
I really appreciate the kind words. In point of fact, one is planned, but I'm still ironing out the perspective.
Date: August 27 2018 7:19 PM Title: Big and Small Roleplay
This story definitely being somehow being missed by ppl. I had to create a profile to encourage you, this is one of the top 5 stories I’ve ever read on this website over the years. I think most ppl just lazy like me and don’t comment. Please keep going.
That's really nice of you to say. The content is to blame for both the infrequent updates and the sparse feedback; I suffer no illusions about the purpose this serves. After all, a Pornhub video can have a million views and only three comments.
Date: August 25 2018 3:50 PM Title: First Day on the Job
This was some good shit, but i feel like it jumped into the deep end (I don't think I need to say what I mean there) too soon, and I think a few gaps between erotic stuff would also be nice
I do like the use of a celebrity, and you made the idea of being in a vagina while it gets fucked not seem completely disgusting, so props to ya
Thank you for the kind words. I do not write this stuff with the pretense of telling any more story than is necessary to provide framework for the juicy bits, so the action starts within the first page and doesn't really let up.
This never struck me as the forum for meaningful character arcs, deep storylines, or bold discussions. Some people use it that way, and I respect that, but it's not my game.
Date: June 24 2018 10:02 AM Title: First Day on the Job
I really dig this one. You have a great talent for description. I’m surprised this has so few reviews. I did like the first title better though.
Just fucking with the alphabetization of story titles; I felt like the male POV character needed a name with two syllables. Thanks for the kind words, though!
Date: June 06 2018 10:25 PM Title: A Little Role-Swap
Great story - very original - told from both perspictives.
Thank you, tallie.
Thanks a lot! This one has been the most fun to write, mostly because of the amount of control I have over the scenarios, and the one-on-one situation gives the chance to make it a real storyline instead of an aimless string of sexuality. There is a story there, I promise, but it's slow because it's development comes at the cost of eroticism.