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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2023 9:31 PM Title: Emma's Challenge

Wow, what a chapter! 

I admit, it was a little tough at first to figure out what was going on when Emma wanted Aaron to use his own tiny body as a sex toy while her mind was in his body and his mind was in her body. But eventually I understood it. 

Near the beginning, I like hearing the thoughts of Emma and how she wanted someone who could be her date and her dildo and how that’s every woman’s dream. Sounds like my dream too except I want to be that date and dildo for someone such as Emma. It’s such a hot kind of relationship. 

I also liked that small scene on the bed where Emma has wrapped Aaron like a teddy bear and pinned his face to her chest. Then the fact that she rolled over and used her body weight to pin him to the mattress was amazing! I would love to see her do that again, but instead Emma could have Aaron’s face at the level of her pussy, and then she rolls over and her crotch is basically pinning his face to the mattress. Perfect way to sleep for the night! 

Then we got the sex scene. As I mentioned earlier it was a bit complicated for me to picture what was happening. I’m also surprised to see Emma embrace being in Aaron’s position during this scene. I’m actually impressed that she even decided to try it. It was very humbling to see her learn that she couldn’t handle being a dildo and it even showed how rough she usually is with Aaron when she used him as a dildo. The difference is that Emma could also quit like it’s a video game, but Aaron is forced to endure it until it’s over. 

That next plan with Dom sounds insane! I mean, is Emma actually going to be in Aaron’s mind next time? That would be such a plot twist. Wow, so many possibilities for that situation. 

Great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! 

Author's Response:

Honestly, the twisted pronouns are a hard thing to make work! I want to communicate that the two characters have swapped minds but it's so hard to make that make sense. This story has yet a way to go, and I hope you like it! There is more body-swapping as well, so hopefully I can make it less confusing!

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2023 4:39 PM Title: First Day on the Job

You ever gonna continue this story? Wanna see what happens when Emma gets her tiny back! Would LOVE some more inside action!

Author's Response:

I just added another chapter! But I'm curious as to where you left off, given that you asked what happens when Emma gets her tiny back? Aaron has returned to his mistress permanently as of Chapter 23 "Going Home."

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2022 4:14 AM Title: I / Me / Myself

I really liked the shopping scene. Especially the tension that was built up. I felt Aaron’s worry as even I felt that he could’ve been punished at any moment. 

We already know how powerful Emma is, so that uneasiness is kinda fun to watch as Aaron struggles with that fear. 

Also, I love how Emma is portrayed as this amazing person to the public, but for Aaron, he sees her as his living nightmare. He wants to escape, but fears the consequences. Man, I love it! 

The body changing scenes are so cool and sometimes confusing lol. I swear, I never get used to who is doing what to who lol. But then again, Emma is in control about 99% of the time I think I understood this time. 

At the end, I like how he shrunk and she is currently holding him under the blanket so he can’t see anything and is trapped with all that body heat. Would love to see her slide his tiny body down between her legs and sleep with him trapped down there. Lol. 

Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Trying to explore the characters a bit! Makes the sexy parts a lot more fun when you can understand the motives of the people behind them.

Glad you enjoy it. It'll keep going!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2022 8:22 AM Title: A Doctor of Self-Doubt

After all this time, I still think it’s great how Aaron is furious about his current position in life, while I’m simply dreaming of taking his place. 

Being Emma’s sex toy might be one of the hottest things ever and the cherry on top is when her favorite spot to keep him was in her underwear. Man, I would love to hear Emma describe how and why she loves to keep him down there. Perhaps we have the same reasons and simply find it a complete turn on. 

I like how Dominique is telling Aaron to endure this lifestyle for weeks and possibly months just for the chance to escape. If it was me, I would be doing the opposite. I would act like I’m sneaky, maybe pretend like I’m escaping, and get Emma to keep me in her panties all the time. Haha! 

I’m just so glad this story is back and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Just a little bit unwilling makes it that much more fun. And I like your idea of having Emma explain why her favorite home for him is her underwear, if you see that in later chapters, it's thanks to you.

I'm glad you like it! I hope the rest meets your expectations.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2021 1:41 AM Title: Procrastination

Glad to see you return with this story.

I always love it when Emma imagines all these crazy, but sexy ideas. It's like she could plan weeks worth of experiments with Aaron and control him in so many ways. 

This whole media/boyfriend idea seems very complicated. It's hard for me to even predict where you are going with it. 

I also like how Emma isn't sold on Aaron being completely obedient to her. Part of me wants him to mess up such as when he was alone on her computer so that way we could see Emma punish him again. Haha!

Well, it's great to see this story return and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

So glad you like it! I've got a sex-rich environment and a seed of potential plot. That's just how I like it; an end is coming but I'm still not sure how to get there.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2020 12:06 PM Title: Editorial Discretion

Glad to see this story get updated. 

Wow, Emma really likes his butt. Even began to daydream about it for some time. Haha. 

Hmm, it's interesting to see what Emma will do whether she makes Aaron public or not. I think it's best for her to keep him private because once she goes public with him, the media will be going crazy about who is Emma's new boyfriend. If she keeps him private, Emma will still have options about what she plans with Aaron. 

The issue is what happens when her boyfriend explains it to the media. If Emma denies it, I think the public will likely believe her. Or she can accept it, but not use Aaron as an reason. I still think she should leave out that little detail. 

Mmhmm, I love the crossing leg trap that Emma did to him. I was thinking that instead of trapping Aaron under her right thigh, she could trap him against her crotch in the tiny gap between her legs while she crosses her legs so he would be completely surrounded by her legs. There would be an opening above him, and he could see Emma simply ignoring him while her legs keep him snug against her. 

Glad to see another update, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks! It's fun, in a way, to write the sadist into a tangled mess of her own making.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2020 8:42 PM Title: First Day on the Job, but For Real

Now this chapter is very different from the rest. 

We got her boyfriend who I guess just left her, and now we got Aaron doing chores that aren't sexual? Lol, this is strange indeed. 

Glad to see this story return, I miss it. 

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The breakaway is partly for fun, partly to experiment. A lot of my stories follow a similar narrative path that I, frankly, haven't figured out how to close. Once I figure out what needs to come next, I hope you won't be disappointed.

Reviewer: Coloradoboy01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2020 2:32 PM Title: First Day on the Job

Great Story so far! Will their be an update soon? I'm dying to find out what happens next!

Author's Response:

I really appreciate the kind words! If I must be honest, 'soon' is a very flexible concept when I am writing this stuff.

Reviewer: minifriend Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2020 12:14 PM Title: Dominique Tipper, Interpol

Excellent update, as always! A lot of really fantastic physicality here. Keep doing what you do. =)

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, mate!

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2019 3:10 AM Title: Dildo Candidate School

Great so far, but is Aaron ever going back to Emma?

Author's Response:

That is the plan, yes. Given how fast I write, it might take a minute.

Reviewer: tinygirlvoyeur Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2019 2:15 PM Title: First Day on the Job

Im sorry but since when did emma watson have full lips

Author's Response:

I apologize for breaking your immersion.

Reviewer: Marcarth Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2018 5:40 PM Title: First Day on the Job

Yup, me again

I see you've fallen into making a story that at least has the illusion of some kind of meaning, and the erotic stuff's still spectacular too, so that's great.

Author's Response:

Recently, I tripped and fell into a bookshelf, and one of the books fell out and hit me in the head. I fear it may have transferred some ideas of a storyline to me.

Don't worry. It'll work itself out soon enough.

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 3:21 PM Title: First Day on the Job

Enjoying this so far. Please continue this. Any chance you could give Aaron another full tour experience through Emma, but we see the entire trip this time through his POV?

Author's Response:

I really appreciate the kind words. In point of fact, one is planned, but I'm still ironing out the perspective. 

Reviewer: Smalluke Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2018 7:19 PM Title: Big and Small Roleplay

This story definitely being somehow being missed by ppl. I had to create a profile to encourage you, this is one of the top 5 stories I’ve ever read on this website over the years. I think most ppl just lazy like me and don’t comment. Please keep going.

Author's Response:

That's really nice of you to say. The content is to blame for both the infrequent updates and the sparse feedback; I suffer no illusions about the purpose this serves. After all, a Pornhub video can have a million views and only three comments.

Reviewer: Marcarth Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2018 3:50 PM Title: First Day on the Job

This was some good shit, but i feel like it jumped into the deep end (I don't think I need to say what I mean there) too soon, and I think a few gaps between erotic stuff would also be nice

I do like the use of a celebrity, and you made the idea of being in a vagina while it gets fucked not seem completely disgusting, so props to ya

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I do not write this stuff with the pretense of telling any more story than is necessary to provide framework for the juicy bits, so the action starts within the first page and doesn't really let up.

This never struck me as the forum for meaningful character arcs, deep storylines, or bold discussions. Some people use it that way, and I respect that, but it's not my game. 

Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2018 10:02 AM Title: First Day on the Job

I really dig this one. You have a great talent for description. I’m surprised this has so few reviews. I did like the first title better though.

Author's Response:

Just fucking with the alphabetization of story titles; I felt like the male POV character needed a name with two syllables. Thanks for the kind words, though!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2018 10:25 PM Title: A Little Role-Swap

Great story - very original - told from both perspictives.

Thank you, tallie.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! This one has been the most fun to write, mostly because of the amount of control I have over the scenarios, and the one-on-one situation gives the chance to make it a real storyline instead of an aimless string of sexuality. There is a story there, I promise, but it's slow because it's development comes at the cost of eroticism.

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2018 10:42 AM Title: First Day on the Job

Really enjoyed the telling and the interesting premise.

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