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Reviewer: Coloradoboy01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2020 2:32 PM Title: First Day on the Job

Great Story so far! Will their be an update soon? I'm dying to find out what happens next!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate the kind words! If I must be honest, 'soon' is a very flexible concept when I am writing this stuff.

Reviewer: tinygirlvoyeur Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2019 2:15 PM Title: First Day on the Job

Im sorry but since when did emma watson have full lips



Author's Response:

I apologize for breaking your immersion.

Reviewer: Marcarth Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2018 5:40 PM Title: First Day on the Job

Yup, me again

I see you've fallen into making a story that at least has the illusion of some kind of meaning, and the erotic stuff's still spectacular too, so that's great.



Author's Response:

Recently, I tripped and fell into a bookshelf, and one of the books fell out and hit me in the head. I fear it may have transferred some ideas of a storyline to me.

Don't worry. It'll work itself out soon enough.

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 3:21 PM Title: First Day on the Job

Enjoying this so far. Please continue this. Any chance you could give Aaron another full tour experience through Emma, but we see the entire trip this time through his POV?



Author's Response:

I really appreciate the kind words. In point of fact, one is planned, but I'm still ironing out the perspective. 

Reviewer: Marcarth Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2018 3:50 PM Title: First Day on the Job

This was some good shit, but i feel like it jumped into the deep end (I don't think I need to say what I mean there) too soon, and I think a few gaps between erotic stuff would also be nice

I do like the use of a celebrity, and you made the idea of being in a vagina while it gets fucked not seem completely disgusting, so props to ya



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I do not write this stuff with the pretense of telling any more story than is necessary to provide framework for the juicy bits, so the action starts within the first page and doesn't really let up.

This never struck me as the forum for meaningful character arcs, deep storylines, or bold discussions. Some people use it that way, and I respect that, but it's not my game. 

Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2018 10:02 AM Title: First Day on the Job

I really dig this one. You have a great talent for description. I’m surprised this has so few reviews. I did like the first title better though.

Author's Response:

Just fucking with the alphabetization of story titles; I felt like the male POV character needed a name with two syllables. Thanks for the kind words, though!

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2018 10:42 AM Title: First Day on the Job

Really enjoyed the telling and the interesting premise.

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