Date: December 22 2019 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
You wrote a situation that's incomprehensible, chaotic, and confusing to the city. And still, you made it easy for readers to understand every action going on, and focus in on them. Each movement has weight to it, and gets enough attention; and yet, it leaves enough to the imagination, and doesn't have any padding. I'm surprised at how invested I got in these nameless characters, with bodies and thoughts only visible in small glimpses.
Date: May 28 2018 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
An excellent pseudo realistic approach to a Giga giantess rampage/love making session. The sheer uncertainty and the unknowable aspect off the two giantesses was especially well done. This was a very good change of pace and very well crafted. We'll done on a very interesting one shot.
Thank you very much :)