[Report This]Date: August 04 2019 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
First off, we need some spacing between those paragraphs. I mean, when I’m reading about Jess and Chad, it suddenly turns into Casey and Jax as if I missed something. But it seemed like a new paragraph which didn’t have a spade in between which confused me.
As far as the content goes, I love it! I love Jess playing with Chad again. I especially love that she stuck him in her push this time. She deserves the pleasure for all this teasing. Casey was great too, but Jess was the star.
Lol, Chad’s Dad is Missy’s ex? What a plot twist! I also am glad that Steve will be out of Missy’s hands. I prefer him with Jess or even better, his wife! If Jess is going to get Steve back, then maybe she can prank Mandy by giving Steve as a doll or something. Except he looks like a tiny sex doll. Mandy feeling horny without Steve will consider using the toy which happens to be Steve and that would be fun to watch.
So Missy gets Chad’s dad, Jess wants to trade for Steve, but I hope she doesn’t give up Chad. I always liked the Chad/Jess combo.
I love the abundance of slaves and can’t wait to see which giantess gets which guy.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I enjoy reading your feedback as much as I do writing my story, i’m glad your still enjoying it, would be great to hear from other readers, but I look forward to your feedback, I’m sorry about the spacing & paragraphs,
I haven’t been writing long and I’m still learning, so your feedback helps a lot.
Thanks for reading & I hope you keep enjoying my story.