[Report This]Date: August 08 2019 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow! Love the progress in this chapter. I thought I hated Missy, but actually Missy is much better than Krystal. Hopefully, Steve leaves Krystal as soon as possible.
Since Krystal is heading to Mandy’s place with Steve inside, we might actually get a scene where Steve might accidentally escape and Mandy might find him. I think it would be sexy if Mandy has no idea it’s actually Steve since she is unaware of the shrinking situation, and then believes Steve is a sex doll. Maybe Krystal could tape Steve’s hands together to his sides and legs together, and suddenly, Steve is a doll, and since he can’t move, Mandy might not notice. Just a suggestion, but it would be kinda sexy.
Then we got Jess. Now she is just collecting slaves at the moment. She has one inside her pussy, one outside licking her pussy, and now she is inviting a third one for coffee. Is Jax going to be under the coffee table? Lol. I doubt Jess could pull that off.
This is a great chapter, but I think this is more of a setup for next chapter since it seems a lot of crazy stuff is going to happen soon.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I love your enthusiasm, it just makes me want to write more & to throw little twists in for all the lucky guys in my story, wasn’t to sure if you’d enjoy this chapter with Krystal, but as life always throws us curve balls, it can’t be perfect all the time, I hope it was a lot easier to read as I took your advice to split up between he scenes & hopefully my writing skills will keep improving, thanks again for the feedback, I look forward to it after every chapter, I’d just love to hear from more readers from time to time, but like I said I really enjoy your feedback, so thank you